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"The Way You See Me" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2016 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Fabulous! Yay! So glad to see you writing again, even if it's only a one-shot. I personally love one-shots. I think for the place in the manga that you inserted this, it's 200% canon, and it was sooooooooooo good oh my gods. I absolutely adore this much more realistic take on the whole 'they get separated from the others, Inuyasha transforms, protects Kagome from the enemy and then they engage in lovey times' cliche. Like you said, nothing wrong with those. I've read plenty and they are fun, but this brave Kagome taking care of transformed Inuyasha just tickles me. I love 'rise to the occasion, hero Kagome', and while I also love a good lemon as much as the next girl it wouldn't have been realistic here so I'm glad you didn't go in that direction. I'm also glad you had Inuyasha pass out for how she took care of the actual bandaging, because it would've probably also been pushing the boundaries of believability had he ended up letting her treat his wounds, but I think the way you handled his gradual recognition of her after waking back up was spot on. And all the WAFFy between them after he turned back, both before and after meeting back up with the others? Squee! This could so have actually happened. A perfect canon insertion that does not take the story off into divergence land afterwards. Well done!

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