| "Purity Redux: Vivication" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2018 20:42 PST
Comment/Review:
I don't think anybody would say a thing if rat poison ended up in a
certain tai-youkai's drink or food. *snickers* Yep. That's how it's
done alright. Get drunk off your ass and decide who's best through
various contests. Looks like Yerik's lessons are going well. And
Inuyasha and Ryomaru can vouch that Saori is safe! Loved this
chapter!
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Reviewed By: AvinPhi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2018 23:45 PST
Comment/Review:
Awwwww cuties!!! They're so sweet! And by the way, yes, Saori
should have tucked the offensive towel. Well, she will, eventually.
*Fangirl giggles*
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Title: Chapter 42
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2018 20:08 PST
Comment/Review:
Omg I just love love love love the cuteness of these two. She
should have yanked that towel indeed lolol
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Reviewed By: Emy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2018 19:22 PST
Comment/Review:
Yeeeeeessss about time for some confirmation and kisses ^-^
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Reviewed By: Emy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2018 19:22 PST
Comment/Review:
Yeeeeeessss about time for some confirmation and kisses ^-^
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Reviewed By: Emy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2018 19:21 PST
Comment/Review:
Yeeeeeessss about time for some confirmation and kisses ^-^
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Reviewed By: Emy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2018 19:21 PST
Comment/Review:
Yeeeeeessss about time for some confirmation and kisses ^-^
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Reviewed By: Emy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2018 19:21 PST
Comment/Review:
Yeeeeeessss about time for some confirmation and kisses ^-^
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Reviewed By: Emy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2018 19:21 PST
Comment/Review:
Yeeeeeessss about time for some confirmation and kisses ^-^
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Title: Chapter 41
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2018 10:42 PST
Comment/Review:
That fortune tellers prediction makes me on edge.. what poison
could she be talking about i wonder.. And a jealous Fai is cute lol
and he wadded out into the water to make sure he got her wreath..
so cute! And if neither one of them know what they are, even tho
they both admit they are mates, they really need to have a sit down
conversation about their relationship
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Reviewed By: AvinPhi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2018 02:56 PST
Comment/Review:
I didn't like this chapter. I loved it! The whole romance was
flowing all too easily, I was waiting for the twist, and you gave
us a huge one with the fortuneteller's words. I like the way the
story is developing, I have my own ideas, but I'm sure you will
outstand all expectations because you are brilliant and you
surprise me every time!
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2018 21:14 PST
Comment/Review:
Chapter 40 was so sweet. I love they have their own flower. I was
swooning through the whole chapter. I still think the poison that
fortune teller was talking about is named Evgeni. Poor Gustav. Fai
could have been a little nicer about it.
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Reviewed By: MiReinaPura On: February 21, 2018 23:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How cute and sweet are they! I wonder if Fai will ever find out
what truly happened to his mother and if they'll be an attempt on
Saori's life when and if they find out how important she is to Fai.
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2018 18:28 PST
Comment/Review:
Aww they made their own fern flower! Those two are just too damn
cute lol
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Reviewed By: Denyelle On: February 21, 2018 10:36 PST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I love this couple and am glad their youkai voices
have caught on quick. No beating around the bush for these two.
Can't wait until they admit it out loud and let the passion take
over!
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