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 Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2018 19:34 PST
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Yay!! They both said the word mate! Sounds like Saori and Yerik are becoming serious partners-in-crime. Sounds like Yerik's training with Inuyasha and Ryo is going well. And I still don't trust Evgeni. He's bad news, I just know it. I know there is more I want to say, but I didn't take notes as I was getting caught up.
 Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2018 17:48 PST
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LOLOL, shades of Kich and Ryo, marriage for a kiss on the cheek, I guess young youkai men aren't that much different from humans. I can't stop laughing...
 Title: Chapter 39
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2018 16:53 PST
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That is hilarious! I wonder how many other girls are out there that he proposed too? Be funny if they all just kept showing up lol and now Fai knows that she is his mate.. so they both know but neither are gonna talk about it... le sigh lol
 Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2018 16:35 PST
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Well this is turning into a interesting party to say the least.. sell off bits and pieces of his territory? No way does that sound like a good idea. And maybe Saori is reading too much into Fais comment about children. Or he might just like Saori nice and round and want to do it more lol
 Title: Chapter 37
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2018 08:29 PST
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Those two just make me want to pinch their cheeks lol not that I would of course.. I don't see Fai letting that happen lol And nice to see Yerik still doing his training and getting better!
 Title: Cuties
Reviewed By: AvinPhi [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2018 01:57 PST
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Awwwwww... So cute! There's so much cutiness in this story, it's overwhelming!!! Fai and Saori, Rinji being a big brother and all, Inuyasha and Ryo training Yerik... I love it, and I really did miss it. Welcome back
 Title: Cuties
Reviewed By: AvinPhi [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2018 01:57 PST
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Awwwwww... So cute! There's so much cutiness in this story, it's overwhelming!!! Fai and Saori, Rinji being a big brother and all, Inuyasha and Ryo training Yerik... I love it, and I really did miss it. Welcome back
 Title: Cuties
Reviewed By: AvinPhi [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2018 01:57 PST
Comment/Review:
Awwwwww... So cute! There's so much cutiness in this story, it's overwhelming!!! Fai and Saori, Rinji being a big brother and all, Inuyasha and Ryo training Yerik... I love it, and I really did miss it. Welcome back
 Reviewed By: Emy [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2018 19:00 PST
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They are the cutest! Not only Saori and Fai but her relationship with Rinji is adorable. I will say I am waiting for the story to move a little bit along but the moments between all of the characters (Yerik and the Bakas included ^-^) make this such an enjoyable read.
 Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2018 02:53 PST
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Have I ever mentioned that I love the way you build your love stories? I adore that you don't rush, and don't jump them into bed at the drop of a hat, or flag, or dust mote, just lovely. You allow them to come to grips with their own feelings and each other without it becoming mauckish or heavy, and allow them to have the funny and embarressing moments that happen in the process of building something so life altering. It makes me feel young again when i am reading your stories. Sigh
 Reviewed By: Denyelle  On: February 08, 2018 05:54 PST
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Thank you for the chapter during your break. This couple of my favorite yet!
 Title: Chapter 36
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2018 17:49 PST
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I like how her youkai voice admitted they were mates all nonchalant like lol I'm glad they were able to have a nice meal and talk about the rumors that are flying around. Definately have to get to the bottom of those.. And YES the party! It will be much better for Fai this year with his mate with him :) these two are just so stinkin cute lol
 Title: Chapter 35
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2018 18:55 PST
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I'm so glad that they were able to call it off. I'm interested to see who has been spreading these lies.. Loved the make out:)
 Title: Chapter 34
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2018 18:42 PST
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If she goes with him to the challenge, will her secret shadows go as well? Then they can see how Fai handles himself. So can Soari for that matter. And right after they barely admit to liking eachother lolol Fai jealous is cute lol
 Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2018 14:28 PST
Comment/Review:
Man, I missed a lot being sick. Hot damn indeed Yerik. Not only do you get Inuyasha, but Ryo too! That prank was funny. Poor old guy! And I still don't trust that old vulture.
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