| "So Many Steps to Death..." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: YOU CANT BEAT DIS ONE EVEN IF U TRIED...
Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoUsLy_gOoDlOoKing On: December 06, 2003 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woziz...this fanfic SNUCK UP ON ME TOO AND IM ALSO SO glad that it did hehe IM a piccolo fan definately and she matched him...i also like the way you keep the others invoveled also...BLAH BLAH all you shudd hear frm me is...GREAT FANFIC ...please update...as soon as you can LoTs Of LuFF lIl ReD HoOdiE...woohoo GO HARD AND WRITE MORE YES MORE...
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Reviewed By: Ezpeanza On: November 02, 2002 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has to be one of the best I have ever read. The way it is written is easy to read and enjoyable. The originality of this story is unbelievable! You have set at a time when hardly any one chooses to write about it. The parents of Sotari was an interesting combination, and the sentence about the mother finding Raditz in a field made me have to think back to the first Dragon Ball Z episode. Now if you could please keep writing this story it would make my day a more enjoyable one. Many thanks Ezpeanza. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, this fic kind of snuck up on me ... and I'm VERY glad it did!! ^_^
This was quite a good(and pleasantly long) prologue. I really like how the new element(our unnamed "woman") to the DB/DBZ was thrown in. She seems to fit perfectly and I can't wait to see how she changes the events and creates her own timeline. I liked your tie in with her past and "the twins." Can't wait for THOSE memories to resurface and cause havoc.
Oooo, you picked a PERFECT place to end and leave me hanging ... what's going to happen!? *notices there are 2 more chapters* oh, heh, guess I should go read those now ...
Quick question ... what is her NAME?? I know her uncle calls her Mei ... but did her parents give her a name?? |
