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"A Second Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]
 Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 13, 2007 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This a very good story and you should keep going with it. I really like this and the you are writing it. Plase update the story soon.
 Reviewed By: *god x hunter*  On: October 11, 2002 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
overall,you need a *LOT* of improvement.Try something new,listen to ideas,create more twisting story line and finally more suspense is good.
 Reviewed By: *god x hunter*  On: October 11, 2002 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
overall,you need a *LOT* of improvement.Try something new,listen to ideas,create more twisting story lineand finally more suspense is good.
 Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2002 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
By the way you write, you must be a kid, but that's ok, just use spell checker and a grammer checker next chapter. Also, Shinji, Rei, and especially Gendo are OOC so try to keep them in character from now on.

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