Reviewed By: Isami-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wee! I really liked this fic alot! The story is good and the characters are nicely IC. However, You had a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that you should probably go back and fix. Other than that, very good! You should write another part to it. |
