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"Coming of the New Scouts" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: bitch [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2002 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cool story, i dont really like sailor moon, but you story is good, you should make it longer, but its good, well i like it so im not gonna critise it... thats nasty espacally if youve spent time on it
 Reviewed By: DarkAngelz [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 24, 2002 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's a good start, yet you called Serneity Serena in it. That's her Earth name.. plus some of the things they say don't sound right.. Re-read it and you'll see what I mean.

Other then that it is very good. Keep up the good work.

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