| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: lazzykane On: December 03, 2002 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know i'm a late reader but boy did this get my attention so please finish |
Reviewed By: UltimaWitch89 On: September 01, 2002 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I really dunno what the hell all that "crapped up grammar" flames are about...cause I really didn't notice any big mistakes, I think I could've missed small ones but ahh who the hell cares. Anyway, I really liked it, though I've seen a lot of fics where Team Rocket starts their assault on the world, this one is actually really good.
One suggestion though, when you write their quotes and what they say, try to portray their accents, personality by having them say it in a...certain expression? Ok, bad explanation...ex: When someone like Misty talks, she rarely uses stuff like do not or it is...usually she would say don't or it's. I don't find it a problem, it's just a bit awkward trying to imagine the characters talking so formally.
Anyway, enough with my stupid rambling, write it anyway you want! This story is great! And if you could, maybe read my Pokefic... "The Call to a Trainer's Destiny"...please? |
Reviewed By: Kyoko On: August 31, 2002 08:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I didn't see a problem with the way you write. I still have to finish your story, but I thought I'd let you know that you have a good fic. I think you have great potential. I hope you continue writing and eventually you'll improve on whatever your weaknesses are right now. Have fun writing & I hope to see another fic by you soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: unown On: August 30, 2002 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its an ok fanfic but you should have more action in it and you have some grammer problems. |
Reviewed By: hihi On: August 29, 2002 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a horrible fanfic. and you should never write another one again |
Reviewed By: hihi On: August 29, 2002 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a horrible fanfic. and you should never write another one again |
Reviewed By: cnjgitiktt On: August 29, 2002 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
uiiutuoo |
Reviewed By: Silver2039 On: August 25, 2002 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have bad grammer it is poorley written and it sucks hard. |
