| "The Blood Never Dries" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh you know planes... Me like Me really like. Now let's see Ash drive a 747 or Concorde... hehe. Kidding.
Yami: You kid? I didn't know you tell jokes.
That's cos your a bit dense
Yami: *whimpers* WAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *bawling*
Oh... dear. |
Reviewed By: Silver2039 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2002 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The second chapter was good but you still had some spelling mistakes. Keep on writing the fanfic is really good. |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly a good start for a fanfic, despite the spelling mistakes that were made in it, but otherwise, keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: Silver2039 On: August 29, 2002 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fanfic was good but you had some spelling mistakes.You also jump from one thing to another. But other than that the fanfic was good.Keep writing. |
