| "Payback Time" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 05:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good and you should keep going with it. I like this story a lot and can't wait to read more. Plase update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: RyuNoSonoTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My Gosh, this fic is COOL This was a pretty original idea, not necessarily the absorption but mostly the memory flashback. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: ss69gogeta98 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked alot, i think you did a good job in staying with the charaters personality, i believed it was them saying what they were saying!
Good Job! Definitely look towards next chapter! |
