| "Beavis and butthead's big adventure, and mayham!" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Cereal Killer On: April 07, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS FUNNY!!!! Please update.
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Reviewed By: Phantom_Renegade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
hunhunhun gr8 story. |
Reviewed By: Jetta On: January 10, 2003 21:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I have to say that this story has a good concept. I loved watching Beavis and Butthead when it was on tv and I love watching many of the animes you cross B&BH with. I like the humor of your story as well. However, I can't get over the frequent spelling mistakes and the confusing grammar. The story also seems a little bland. Everything happens too fast and it is too repetitive...which works for B&BH (due to lack of IQ), but to be repetitive with other characters is a little OOC. I think if you added a little more meat to your story, it would be extremely funny and very enjoyable to read. P.S. All the spelling mistakes could be overlooked if you could just spell Beavis correctly (not beeves), since it is one of your most used words. |
Reviewed By: Dudeman On: January 19, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This wasn't too bad. I wish you could have made a bit more sense, but it was still pretty funny. If you like this kind of fic, I recommend "Beavis and Butt-head Do Midgar" by DragonPanther. |
Reviewed By: Myst Runner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Myst: Whahahahaha. that was funny.
Trio: no that was disturbing.
Myst: Funny.
Trio: Disturbing.
*30 minutes later.*
Fullen: It was both disturbing and funny. kay you two.
Myst/Trio: Kay.
*Griff the Griffin Muse flies into the wall next to the bar.*
Trio: *Nelson laugh* Ha Ha.
Myst: good fic keep it up.
Griff: *gets up and looks around* hey where did Riff go?
Myst: never mind Myst Runner out. |
Reviewed By: lady_shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't do the jig, but I have an electric guitar! *remembers that is not true* |
Reviewed By: Psycho Elf On: October 20, 2002 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally not meaning to be mean! Don't kill me! I know you probably worked hard on this, but I’m sure you could do better! ^_^
Style of writing: Well, I think that it’s a bit plain. Every time someone says something, it's always the same. What they’re saying is first, and then what they’re doing is second.
“No” said yusuke flatly, very annoyed at all the dumb questions.
You could make this a little more colorful by revising it to something like:
Yusuke was by now becoming very annoyed with all the dumb questions. "No." He stated flatly.
It’s ok to have some with the quotes first, but with all of them like that, it’s a little boring.
Spelling & Grammar: There were several spelling and grammar errors, I must say. Lots of words that were mis-used, mis-spelled, and your capitalization and punctuation was off too.
Originality: This really is very original.
I like :)
Enjoyment: It does give me a bit of a head ache to read, no offense, but overall, its pretty funny. Make it a little bit more colorful, though. Perhaps if you'd revise it, you'd have scores more of reviewers. :)
Overall: The Creativity and Enjoyment are rated pretty high, however, The style, spelling and grammar definatly need some revising. All and All, Its not half bad. :) ^_^ |
Reviewed By: lady_shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 11:58 CDT
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Chap 4 is great! MUAHAHAHA!!!! It's SO funny! Continue! |
Reviewed By: lady_shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 19:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked the 3rd chap! IT was my idea for the millenium turd and turd man! MUAHAHAHA!! |
Reviewed By: EMILY On: September 12, 2002 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gurl, u can write, and it was awesome. |
Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2002 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ROFLMFAO* I remebr watching Bevis and ButtHead do America before... *like, a bunch of times...* o.O This is sooooo funny! Can't wait for the Digimon, Sailor Moon, Yu-gi-oh, and DBZ!!! On Digimon, what season are you gonna do? I'm just wondering. PLEZE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: lady_shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 12:45 CDT
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Heh... this is getting too perverted. Howbout they um... don't act so perverted? Well, that's alot to ask of them.. |
Reviewed By: lady_shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 06:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
SHEENA, THIS WAS JUST AS MUCH MY IDEAS AS YOURS!!!!!! YOU NEED TO GIVE ME CREDIT!! I'M THE ONE WITH THE PIT-TOILET THING, I'M THE ONE WITH THE MILLENIUM TURD IDEA, GIVE ME CREDIT!!!!!!!!
Very funny, I need to edit it, though. |
Reviewed By: AisuErufu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2002 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.o I have to say Shinigami, I'm not a big fan of those two people. *supressing the urge to pumel them with bricks* But then again.... INU YASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomps Inu Yasha* |
Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm back! Sworry it was too long... A lot of things happened... -.-
ANY-HOO! OMG!!! Millnium Turd?! *looks for b/f Amanda, so she won't kill author* She's not here! ^_^ Well done! |
