| "Velvet Flames" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:51 CST
Comment/Review:
i've come to the conclusion that it's possible that zephyr was orphen's mother. well, regardless, i like how it's progressing.
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
well, that was interesting. so who's Zephyr? and what importance does she have to him? and does Hartia's "preference" extend to Kry? or rather, i assume it's hartia's preference that was referred to.
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Reviewed By: Lee On: July 21, 2003 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe this didn't get more reviews *looks appaled* this is a great story, it defintely deserves more recognition *nods* please update the sequel soon *pleading look* I absolutely love all you're Orphen/Majic stories, I really do (I haven't seen the whole series so I don't know -all- the characters, the only ones I know are Orphen, Majic, Cleao and Fiena... or however you spell it. Otherwise I would probably read another pairing *grins sheepishly*) Well I hope you come up with something new ^.^ |
Reviewed By: LadyJessy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 22:36 CDT
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Keep writing. i love Orphen and there are not enough good fanfiction and pictures out there of the series! :) |
Reviewed By: Locura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed the fic you've posted sense I found very few Orphin fan fics anyway and these have been yaoi. This story looks like its going to be very interesting and I hope you continue it! |
