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Reviewed By: Perverted Critic On: May 25, 2005 01:04 CDT
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Hello!^^So far I liked your fic very much! It's really worth continuing (hint, hint, wink, wink)! About the title - it's difficult to the suggest something without knowing what kind of interest towards Gojyo daes Goku have. If Gojyo = food, you could name the fic smth like "Craving" or "A delicious partner". That leaves a lot of space for speculations, ne? ^.~
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Reviewed By: Horny Critic On: March 20, 2005 16:11 CST
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Cool! You know, this has a potential to become something naughty ^.^ I liked the originality of how Goku's interest get's picked: he seems to begin veiwing Gojyo as some kind of "food", which could have hentai as well as really dark connotation. I wish you could continue the story 'cause it end's so unclearly. And with Hakkai worrying as he does there is a good possibility to develop complicated relationsips and add intrigue to the story. I also liked the touch of suspense and your stile is nice to read! So, if you write another fic on Saiyuki sometime I'd enjoy to read it.
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Title: No title help, bu~ut...
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 00:25 CDT
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You need to write more anyway, even without a title!! So there! I decree it and umm yeah. Please continue. Cool writing, nice intro to the story, happy day ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jenni On: November 26, 2002 13:03 CST
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This is really good, i do hope you continue it. You characterise everyone well and have a lovely writing style. I hope that you update this because it starts so well. |
Reviewed By: Nightcat82 On: June 28, 2002 03:15 CDT
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*blink blink* Oi! Where's Chapter 2??? XD common! write!! Write!! *takes whip* |
