| "Break the Mirror." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ? On: September 26, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only problem with this story is that you ended it too soon. You should have put in when all three of them went into the Digital World and taught Dai his powers. You should have also had a part in which Ken, Dai and Jun went back to the the other world and got revenge against the woman who murdered her husband. So even if you said that you ended this story, you really left a big cliffhanger.
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Reviewed By: digigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 20:21 CST
Comment/Review:
It real the end. WHAT?!!!!! I don't get it then. Well if not the end.....Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah can you read my 'Star seed Digivole' please and Thank you. ^_^
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Reviewed By: XZanayu On: November 13, 2002 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just adore this story! Its great!! |
Reviewed By: Shuuichi Minamino On: November 03, 2002 00:51 CST
Comment/Review:
One word: Cooooooooooooool!^^ |
