Reviewed By: Sakura On: April 13, 2003 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story line but you need to proof read your work, there are a lot of spelling errors
but other than that I thought it was wonderful. hurry up and write the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks,
Sakura |
