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| "Sun Patches" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Catie On: June 11, 2005 03:28 CDT
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This would make a good intro to that other fanfic you mentioned towards the end. I see that you also dislike that character Chichi; annoying, isn't she? Oh, and don't listen to a single word DBZ Lover said. S/he has NO right to tell you how to write your fanfics and s/he should be ashamed! It's YOUR fanfics, not hers/his, and s/he shouldn't get on your case just because you don't like a certain character, and go on to tell you what you should write in order to please them! Quite rude. Anyway, if you ever start to work on that fanfic, write what you want to write, and I'll enjoy reading it no matter what.^^
| Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 01:17 CDT
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wow! that was so cute! i want to read the ficcy now! very sweet, glad u made it its own thing, it was great. just thought i should let ya kno! but i'm sure u did...... tata! *goes in search of other fic* | Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 16:42 CST
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Hey! What do you have against Chi-Chi?! I can't stand the thought of Goku being with anyone else but her(Except maybe me of course, heh, heh, just kidding.) Could you like not kill Chi-Chi, but instead have Goku break up with her, try to find a met, but see that he can't be with anyone else, and then they could have a kind of a passionate relationship together? Yeah, I know you're probebly gonna be annoyed with me for telling you what to do, but, if you have to make Goku fall in love with someone, could you at least not kill Chi-Chi? Oh, and another favor. Could you review a story I wrote called Goku:A New Life on Earth? I really need some reviews. Thanks, bye! | Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like Goku said go for it great fic i loved it ^_^
Ja'Ne |
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