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Reviewed By: 6546816 On: August 21, 2010 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
well done. I usually don't like B/V stories, or "adu fics (see above re: 12 year olds), but this was very well written. Also, introducing Bulma to Vegeta's friends was an original way to go about a tried story line. So to the author and the beta-ers: please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Charm Sahara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this story YEARS ago and i just wanted to say that it is still the best b/v fan fic i've ever read! I never get sick of reading it! awesome job!!
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Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 10:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's Sexyyy!!! >.<
I really feel jealous toward Bulma. *cough...cough...I want to replace her place in the hunt...cough..coughh* Vegeta sama, you're so sexy, would you be mine? *receive death galre from Vegeta* Guess not *sigh* Anyway, will you write sequel about their romance after they have Trunks and Bulma? I want to see the Z fighters be shocked. It will be cute, cannot wait
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive just read this, and i have to admit, it is one of the best stories i have read, it flowed well and it made me want to read each chapter completely, it also made me laugh at the humour you portrayed between the two characters, well done
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
XD
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Title: Still an enjoyable fic.
Reviewed By: (bura400) not signed in On: June 01, 2005 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this fanfiction years ago and I enjoyed it then. I just reread it again and it's still an extremely enjoyable story. I love the teasing seductive Vegeta! ^_~ A sensual, intoxicating MUST READ. Great job! Bura400/Tara
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Flaming Rose On: April 05, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have already e-mailed the author and let her know this, but Show Him How was absolutely amazing. It was well balanced and sexy as all get out. It was refreshing to read the lemony parts and not feel like a 12 year old had written it. I hate it when the scene is about 3 lines long and the author clearly has no concept about what happens during lovemaking. Catgirl, you did a fantastic job. I also recommend many of her other stories. They're also very good.
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Reviewed By: caramel_kiss84 On: February 26, 2004 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I wanna give you major props for writing this fic! It is the best B/V fic I have ever read (and I'm not bullsh*ting either.) I loved the storyline, especially the hunt scene and the fighting. All I can say is that it's one helluva story! You deserved the rating! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 22, 2003 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was one of the best storys i have ever read i culdent stop reading it untill i was done |
Reviewed By: Bulma Peacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still say this is the best fic you've ever written, kitty katt. I'll have everything done tonight. You know what I mean. |
Reviewed By: Audra On: December 08, 2002 18:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad to find this story here. I had read it on ff.net over and over. It is one of my favorites, and I was very upset that it got deleted. |
Reviewed By: SorceressRinoa On: November 01, 2002 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely, positively, amazing.
Now if only I could have a Veggie-chan for myself.......and I can only hope that my B/V fic get finished and is even remotely close to being as good as yours.
*clicks the back button to read more of your fics* |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic! |
Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 On: September 25, 2002 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I allready knew this fic from www.worldzone.net/anime/.... .
And I loye it!! It´s one of the most fantanstic B/V fics I´ve ever read!! A very very good job. I hope you´ll write another good DBZ fanfic. |
Reviewed By: Salvia Tanima [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found it great. I hope you're going to write more such fics. There is one tiny lil thing, though. It was sooooo long. But definitely worth reading. I've read it on FF.net, and was quite disappointed when they said they'd be removing NC-17 fics. And I like your fic the most in the fic contest on Gokusgirl site. "A Private Place". It was GREAT!!!! Keep going! |
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