| Reviewed By: Saint Ebony On: June 11, 2004 01:09 CDT|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Well, you've surprised me. You see, I don't like you, and I don't like your works either, but this... This I enjoyed. I really enjoyed seeing Otaru and Cherry together. She is, after all, my favorite character. However, I did have to dock some marks. I only gave you a seven in Style because I so greatly despise your other works that it spills over. I give you an eight in S & G, because, although you did write very well, very skillfully throughout, I do think you went a bit overboard in the drunk scene; and speaking of that, that is the reason I lowered the Enjoyment Factor. While I did enjoy seeing Otaru with Cherry, I think this story would have been much better without the Bloodberry/Hanagata pairing. I did give you a nine in creativity, and this is because it is so rare to find an Otaru/Cherry fic. All in all, I say this story did surprise me; I certainly expected much worse from the "Queen of Disgusting Yaoi." Good Work. Now all you need to do is hide the blemishes of the past with better, more recent works, preferably involving male/female pairings if any.