| "New Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Corona On: September 15, 2002 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. really is it. This power belongs to Goku and not to Faith *sniff* Please write a Continuation and let him be the Ultimate Kai. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooo!!! There is no way you can stop there. Absolutly no way! That is just cruel. You are a very cruel, but very good author. (*grins*)
Poor Goku... its so sad. The story has a perfect mix of emotions and action. I'm guessing the whole thing with Trunks will tie in with the story later on? If not it still a good way to get the readers minds off whats going on with Goku. Variation. The key to a good story. At elast thats wat I believe. Too bad I dont use it in my own writing *sigh* I really probably should.
Anyways you had better keep writing this and update it soon. If you dont I'll... I'll... actually I'll probably cry. o.O
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com
ps. If you want more people to read it, the best way is to post chpaters seperatly. Like 1 a day. I also find that between 6 and 8 seems to be the best time. More people are looking then. |
