Reviewed By: The Silver Ranger [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god, this fic....it's dynamite. I was almost at a loss for words reading this. The way you had described Oikawa's character was absolutely perfect. Just observing the events of Ken's transition into darkness...it's almost beyond words. Although it's a little off on the timeline. Vandemon was only supposed to possess him during the time when he had witnessed the chosen children enter the digital world and several months if not almost a year after Hiroki had died. Other than the timeline, the rest of this fic was sublime. Great and serious art. Keep writing friend. The Silver one gives you his support. Silver_Lighstar@yahoo.com
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