| "violet eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Yae On: April 01, 2005 05:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!! I like it so much... No... I meant I LOVE it!!! You did avery god job in here as a fanfic story you could made the main story of the case so real. There's the dectective story to solve who really could be the Target is... I like to guess it!! And I love YxA or AxY (I dont care how they turn it on... like it both...;p) so much... So I love your story!!! Keep it up!!!^___^
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Reviewed By: ITSAME On: February 02, 2005 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is one of the best Weiss fics I've ever read! Before reading this, I was kind of iffy on the YohjixAya pairing...but now I have the seen the light! XD; Anyways, this was written very well. I was wary at first, thinking this would just be the usual 'working at gay club/bar/whatever' fic, but it was so unique and you made the story last so long, but without being excessively dragged out. Also, you had very lovable OC's. Teddy and everyone was adorable and a great addition to the fic. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Auribiel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story and nice setting... *goes reading it again... and again...* I just can't get enough of it... :)
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Reviewed By: Lady Mary On: March 12, 2003 09:20 CST
Comment/Review:
exactly the kind of fiction I love. |
Reviewed By: Rishi kun On: March 06, 2003 07:06 CST
Comment/Review:
A rather good fic I'd say just the last chapter bothers me
Do you really think that Aya would be intrested in Sex just after being beaten brutally?
and more then that Do you think his dameged body could take it?
I'd say Definitely not. May be one week after that but not at that time.
Sex dosen't help you forget and it isn't a remedy for any kind of injuries. |
Reviewed By: Amy the Yu On: January 04, 2003 15:13 CST
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LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!!!
That was so funny and so *drool*...
Ya gotta love it when Aya dresses to kill. XD Man....*drool*
I think I need a bucket. O.O
PEACE OUT =) |
Reviewed By: Dana On: December 12, 2002 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best Weiss fics I've ever read.
I also love Seiichi and teddy , you've don a pretty good job. |
Reviewed By: Dragonscales On: November 30, 2002 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic i read it once and then found myself back and reading it again in less then 24 hours. Great piece of work congratulations. |
Reviewed By: Sayiera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kawaii!!!!!!:)
I really enjoyed your story. To bad it's over now :( |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've said it "elsewhere" and I'll say it here. I really did enjoy this story. The set up wasn't super original, but you managed to make it seem original.
But I'm a sucker for Yoji & Aya stories, and I love yours. |
