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| "Dragonball Z Boot Camp" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] | | Pages (7): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 > » ] | Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess TRF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Nother great chappie! Except I only had one line...ah, well. I understand not being able to give everyone equal attention. WE RESCUED VEGETA!! YAY! And how can that other person rule the camp? It's nt fair! That should be Veggie-Chan's job! I'm gonna kill that other person-
George: You say you're going to 'kill'people a lot lately. Have you been around Heero excessively?
*innocent face* I have no clue what you mean George!
Heero: If figure she can be my protage.
*points to person who's supposed to rule the camp* I will kill you.
Heero: *gives her a cookie* good girl.
YAY! *Eats cookie* I will kill you *points to the evil rocks and bunnies*
Heero: *gives her another*
George: *Sigh* I believe this is what they call inforcing bad behavior....*shakes head*
*pointing to everything in a ten mile radius* I WILL KILL YOU ALL!
Heero: *Gives her a bag of cookies*
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA!!!
*Eats all cookies* I can write a long review too!
This
is
a
pointless
review.
I
didn't
see
anything
in
the
rules
against
doing
this.
My
review
isn't
long
enough
this
time
but
wait
until
next
time!!!!
P.S. BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Ja Ne for now,
TRF. | Reviewed By: Saiyan Genius [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arty: REVIEW TIME! MUAHAHHAHAHA
Taigore: Guess whose back
Twitch: we’re back
Arty: I got to be put in a cell with Goku, Muahahahahahaha
Taigore: You are a weird one, you don’t even like Goku as much as you do Vegeta and 11-15 year old Gohan
Twitch: Yeah!
Arty: So what?
Taigore: ~_~ I don’t know
Twitch: ^_^;;;;
Arty: I think I’ll just do my review first and ramble for the rest…sound like a good idea?
Twitch: we did inspire it so what do you expect?
Arty: Heh, S’rac inspired me the other day
Taigore: You’re getting off the subject
Arty: Oh yeah, J’dee I loved this chapter…. I mean I got to TRY and free Goku, I got to act insane…well I always do that…I got to use my giant carrot, and powers, I was laughing so hard throughout the chapter.
And I didn’t mind when Tanti pulled her weapon on me…I thought all out war was a good way to put it.
MWAHAHAHAHA
Taigore: I repeat you’re a weird one.
Arty: Oh and I WANT MY PHONECALL!
Twitch: Um right.
Arty: You know what I mean…the one phonecall that you get in jail…
Taigore: Oh that thing
Twitch: Who are you gunna call?
Arty: Um I guess the Boot Camp office
Taigore: Who are planning to talk to?
Arty: Whoever answers
Twitch: What if Vegeta answers?
Arty: what about it?
Taigore: You think he’s going to relay your message to anyone? No he’s not going to do anything that will help Kakarot
Arty: Well then I’ll talk 2 J’dee or S’rac
Twitch: but can you be sure of that
Arty: I suddenly have an urge for muse whacking
Taigore: That’s not very nice
Arty: How many times do we have to go over this? I am not a nice person
Twitch: Are you and Tanti friends
Arty: You might say that…’cos she’s not angry with me…so I’m not angry with her…I CAN HUG HER!
Taigore: You ever think she might not want a hug?
Arty: Everyone wants a hug, especially from me
Taigore: Sure
Arty: **hugs Taigore** There ya go
Taigore: You’re a freak
Arty: You didn’t mean that
Taigore: I bet I did
Arty: ~_~
Twitch: that’s soooo scary…NOT
Arty: I was sorely tempted to sick both of you on Tanti till she grew tentacles…but I changed my mind…so now we’re going to hurt Kuno ‘cos he called me incompetent.
Taigore: Can I eat him
Arty: No he has to suffer
Taigore: Aw
Arty: You can chew on him a bit
Twitch: So Arty who do you think the mystery black haired character is?
Arty: I’ll just shout out random Dragonballz character names throughout my review
Taigore: That should be interesting
Arty: Yeah I know
Twitch: So what’s been happening everyone?
Arty: CHICHI
Taigore: Oh I ate a few plushies, a broke my pillow, then I chased a few evil chickens around the farm for a while, you?
Arty: RADDITZ
Twitch: Nothing, I practised my flamethrowing
ARTY: YAMCHA
Taigore: Yamcha had been happening
Arty: Oh YEAH YAMCHA IS ALWAYS HAPPENING, UH Huh, UH Huh.
Taigore: should I be scared?
Arty: Sorry that was a tribute to J’dee, and a take out of the emperors new groove
Twitch: Yeah you’ll do anything to get on J’dee’s good side
Arty: I do not, I can’t help it that I’m loveable
Taigore: **starts choking**
Arty: KRILLIN
Twitch: You know that’s going to get really annoying
Arty: ANDROID 17, yeah I know
Taigore: why don’t you just list them now.
Arty: fine…I’ll start again…Chichi, Radditz, Yamcha, Krillin, Android 17, King Vegeta (yes he was in Vegeta’s flashbacks) Videl, Hercule (shudders) Gotenks (Does he count ‘cos he has purple in his hair) Yajorobe, King Yemma (I don’t know if he has hair) Ox King, Saiyaman, Bubbles, Dende with a black wig, Mr Popo without his turban, Brolly, Turlus, Chibi Gohan.
Twitch: That’s it?
Arty: Yeah…but I don’t know about some of them…cos they really have brown hair
Taigore: Who cares about details?
Arty: Not me
Twitch: You are weird
Arty: I watched a lot of sad video clips today…where everyone in Dbz dies…
Taigore: And this concerns us why?
Arty: Because this is what I am choosing to talk about, so you’ll have to put up with it
Twitch: Fine
Arty: Anyway…it started with Goku dying against Radditz…he looks sooo much like a monkey when he dies…and his head falls to the side…very sad.
Twitch: No comment
Taigore: Diddums
Arty: Then it went to Yamcha getting blown up…and it had Bulma crying over him…it was sooo sad…the look on their faces
Twitch: You mean Bulma…the one BananaGirl doesn’t like?
Arty: Yeah that one…
Taigore: HEHEHEHE
Arty: Oh do shut up…Anywho…then it just had Tien and Chiotzu dying that wasn’t sad. But then Piccolo sacrificed himself for Gohan…**sniff** it was sooo tragic.
Taigore: Yeah a bean dying is sad
Arty: Yeah you dying would be a celebration
Twitch: I Can’t LOOSE HIM, COS THEN I WOULD FADE AWAY…
Arty: Fine just for you I will let the baka live
Taigore: **sarcastically** Oh thank you oh gracious one
Arty: You’re welcome
Then it went to Namek when Gohan gets his neck broken…very sad…but he didn’t die…then Dende died…and Vegeta…. OH THAT WAS SAD…. UTTERLY TRAGIC! AND WHEN THEY DIDN’T EDIT IT. >AND THEY BLOOD SPEWED OUT OF HIS MOUTH, AND HE SLUMPED BACK **SNIFFLES**
Taigore: and you got more upset over him dying then you did Goku
Arty: well I knew Goku would be back…he always pulls through
Twitch: Excuses
Arty: **ignores taunting** Then it had the Cell games where Trunks Died…. Oh how that hurt…and Vegeta’s reaction…I think that’s why I like him…’cos he has feelings deep under that machoness…anyway…yeah Trunks dying was sad…
Twitch: You’ve said that about every nearly every death so far.
Arty: I am an emotional evil person okay? CAN U JUST LEAVE THAT ALONE!?
Taigore: Drama Queen
Arty: And proud of it
Twitch: jeez
Arty: THEN WHEN GOKU DIED…. OH THAT WAS CRUSHING AND HIS LITTLE SPEECH…AND HOW HE SACRIFICED HIMSELF…HE’S SOOO NOBLE
Twitch: Blah
Taigore: I’d say
Arty: ~_~ U DOESN’T UNDERSTAND
Twitch: RRIIGGHHTT
Arty: Then it had Goku’s dream where everyone dies in the future…where Trunks gets stabbed with his own sword by seventeen…etc…etc
And then Marai Gohan dying…**sniff**
Taigore: You need help
Arty: Do not
Twitch: You do
Arty: And that’s about it for the sad clips…but I have quite a few pictures of the moments when the characters do die…
Taigore: Nobody cares
Arty: And I have really cool pictures of a lot of the Z characters naked…or pictures of their butts from the actual show…MMM Veggie is the shower…steamed Veggie…Lol, and there’s Goku and Gohan but I’m not goin’ into my thoughts about them…I mean I guess reviews have a rating to.
Oh and there’s several of Trunks ^_^
Taigore: You know that’s just wrong
Arty: They wouldn’t have put them in Dbz if people weren’t supposed to see them
Twitch: Touché
Arty: and I have a lot of humour picture, like Vegeta singing B.I.N.G.O and then there’s the one of Vegeta flushing Goku down the toilet.
Then there’s a few that make fun of Vegeta ‘cos Goku is stronger then him…
Then there are ones of Gohan being a pussy, etc etc
And there’s a couple of Bulma beating Krillin up
And then there’s a rip off of the power puff girls. But there’s only two and they are Androids 17 and 18
Oh and there’s a whole heap of finger pulling
A few light sabres
Stupid quotes
Stuff like that
Taigore: Why do people need to know this
Arty: They don’t
Twitch: Oh so your wasting time again?
Arty: Pretty much
Taigore: O fun
Arty: Yeah…. You know what I reckon would be funny…if Trunks got his sword taken off of him…and he was given a spatula instead…I’d love to see his face
Taigore: He’d be like…what the Hfil am I supposed to do with this
Arty: I was gunna give him a frying pan…but then he’d be too girly
Twitch: Lol, I can imagine that…feminine Trunks
Arty: I have a picture of Trunks wearing a shirt that’s all battle worn…and his jacket his half way down his arms, and he’s looking at you….
Taigore: We don’t need to hear your perverted talk
Arty: I am not talking perverted
Twitch: Sure
Arty: So about Kuno
Taigore: Oh yes what about him
Arty: I decided that we’d just call him names and mock him this time, but next time…I will harm him
Taigore: You mean we’ll do the dirty work
Arty: You know me so well
Twitch: and that’s not a good thing
Arty: _ I’m watching you
Taigore: Heh, that’s sooo lame
Arty: Any way, Kuno if I am incompetent then you are a third class social reject who has to much time on his hands and an over inflated ego which is in dire need of popping, and a delusion that one day pig-tailed girl and the other chick might fall in love with your pathetic hide
Twitch: Ooh harsh
Arty: No I was quite nice there
Taigore: I’d hate to see you riled up
Arty: MWHAHAHAHA, normally I would have gone on how he was a waste of skin, paper, whatever he’s made of, and that he’s not worth my time or my effort, it crushes people’s self esteems soooo much
Twitch: Are you sure you put yourself in the right platoon?
Arty: That’s none of your beeswax
Taigore: RRIIGGHHTT
Arty: Anyway I’m sick at the moment…and J’dee knows how it feels so she’ll let me off lightly for not writing a long review this time…’cos she gets me
Taigore: No Comment
Arty: Yeah so cool chapter J’dee, and when I feel better I’ll put another review up ~_~ I’m soooo evil
So peace out, Ciao 4 now, Jour De Ma Vie, I WANT MY PHONE CALL
Taigore: The mental pills are needed, that sentence made no sense
Arty: Yeah…I’ll write a longer review next time…
(P.S. if I win that guess thing, which I know I won’t I want my prize to go to someone else…I think I’d scare the Dbz characters too much…I’ll tell you who later.)
** PSS I am sorry I didn’t write a long review**
Taigore: You don’t really care…you get to share a cell with Goku
Arty: Yeah…(*_* stares at Goku) I’m soooo lucky
Goku: **looks around worriedly**
Later’z…**sits on the ground and thinks of an escape plan** Fear not people, your beloved Arty shall be freed from this prison and shall wreck terror on the camp, and then I shall hug everyone…. SO LOOK OUT! MWHAHAHAHAHA | Reviewed By: natty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 22:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
herm.. i need some sort of weaponry.. and it hasta be in mai review.. i always have mai.. trusty pencil!!! muahahaha! *pokes bardock w/ it*
- stop that
no.. muahaha! you cant drown in slobber.. is that possible?
its mai job to make you go crazy bar-kun
i dont slobber *that* much... bah o well.. that is unless im staring at a nice vegeta poster which btw my room is plastered in... mmm...veggie.... I WANT THAT VEGeta T*SHIRT!!!!! IT WILL BE MINE MUAHAHAHA!!!!
- *smacks forehead* what have i done to deserve this?
its okay bardock..ur trapped in here wit meh! (breaks off into a bout of evil laughter)
that is.. until one of mai faithful plushies comes to save me.. oh where has mai army gone?!
oh yes.. weaponry.. can i have a plush gun *similar* to that of taichichi's but without the ultra shibby 'anime' setting? just the plush one.. also i would like some ki resistant handcuffs for.. previously stated reasons.. lol
wait.. in the mega cap fic bardock is mai 'tousan..
-"...."
NOOOO!!!! IM LOCKED UP WIT MAI OTOUSAN!!! lol jk *subliminal messages* go read stina-chan's fic Life at the Meg Cap....oOoOo...lol* o_O i*d like to be locked up wit vegeta... *daydreams*
-who's in the next cell again?
dunno.. *looks* *waves* hello stina-chan ^__^;; i think.. HAHA POKE YOO WIT MAI PENCIL!!! *poke*
~owchie
alrightie im done.. i want mai artillery -__- lol mai army of plushies will save me!!!!!! muaha! away!!! *claps coconuts together and trots around small cell*
| Reviewed By: DeathStorm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooo, is it Turles?...IS IT YAMCHA?! MESA BET YOUSA IT IS! Oooooooooooooooo, it could be! It could be!...0_0 An online stalker?! Eep! Scary thoughts...YES! THIS FIC NEEDS MIRAI IN A SHOWER SCENE! NOW THAT IS KEY! Poor Ryoga needs some better sense of direction, yeesh. And if peoples can cuss in a PG-13 movie then yousa can say slut in a fic! -_- For crying out loud. THIS FIC NEEDS MIRAI IN A SHOWER SCENE!
YLG,
DS | Reviewed By: Srac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 18:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
S'rac: Yo all! Waddup.
Kuno: *Groans*MUST you use slang?!
S'rac: Nooooo. I was using it for comedy purposes.
Kuno: Well we're all very amused.
S'rac: Yay! My plan worked!
Kuno: Shouldn't you instead be planning how to rescue your incompotent platoon member and that person with strange hair, whom you call,"Goku"?
S'rac: Okay, first of all Arty is NOT incompotent! Those rocks, bunnies, and eggs can be tricky! And yeah.....I prolly should be thinking up plans........Hmmmm...*Thinks, then smirks evilly*YOU'RE gonna help me Kuno!
Kuno: I shall do no such thing!!!
S'rac: See here's my plan: We get to the enemy compound, then you use One Hundred Strikes on it and it crumbles at your feet! Mwahahahahaha!!!
Kuno: I fear I must decline.
S'rac: Ooh! You used that line in Season 4, Episode 55! "Blow Wind! To Be Youth Is To Go Gung Ho!"
Kuno: Uh huuuuh.....
S'rac: It says so here on this site!*Points at site he got Season #, Episode #, and Episode Name from*
Kuno: I shall still not assist you in such a plan!
S'rac: Kuuunoooo! Don't forget Rule # 7: "NEVER EVER EVER underestimate the power of the author who writes the fic, she I would say he, but stats are a majority of writers online are women especially with Dragonball z related topics, anyways SHE could do horrid horrid things to you if you annoy her too much," as Tanti put it.
Kuno: Fool! If any such author attempts such madness as you are suggesting, I will smite them!
S'rac: That would be reeeeeally not kool Kuno.
Kuno: Do you honestly think I care?!
S'rac: Well......uh.....maybe Akane and the Pig-Tailed Girl wouldn't like it.
Kuno: Hmmmm......I shall consider this...
S'rac: Okay then. And that's a great idea Tanti had in her review. Except change Fushigi Yuugi.......*Smirk*To Ranma 1/2. Yes! A Ranma 1/2 Boot Camp! I would sooo be Leader of Platton Kuno! Then BG would wanna be Platoon Leader for Mousse. And J'dee and Mabelle would fight over Platoon Leader for Ryoga! Mwahaha! What ingenious!
Kuno: I would not allow any rocks, bunnies, or whatever they are to capture me!!! They can keep Saotome.
S'rac: *Is still rammbling on about different Ranma fics that could be written*Or ANBM for Ranma! Or AFZ for Ranma! Or TP for Ranma! Or The Official Fanfiction University of Ranma 1/2! Or ABDN for Ranma! Or-*Is hit by Kuno's bokken*OW!!
Kuno: Shut UP already! I'm sure even these incompotent fools get it by now!!!
S'rac: Well you didn't have to hit me! You coulda asked NICELY ya know!
Kuno: Feh. You would ignore anything I said. You were rambling after all.
S'rac: Well.......still......On another note, I've been getting people into Ranma lately! Ooh I'm soo happy!*Big Grin* Like just recently BG told me her fav character was Mousse! I'm soooo happy!
Kuno: Why do they not choose me instead?! I'm much better than anyone else!!
S'rac: Umm....
Kuno: I'm gorgeous! I'm brilliant! I'm rich! I even have a great personality!
S'rac: You used that line in Graphic Novel 13: Part 6: When You Wish Upon a Sword: Page 96!!!!!*Holds up Graphic Novel 13, from whic he got this information*
Kuno: Must you keep doing that...?
S'rac: Hmmm........Must I?
Kuno: No.
S'rac: I dunnoooo. Let's ask the audience!
Kuno: You can't. They won't even see this until you submit it.*Shakes his head* Honestly.
S'rac: I knew that Kuno! Haven't you ever heard of comedy?!
Kuno: Of course. It's not my fault you can't think up any good jokes.
S'rac: That's not very nice. Why can't you treat me better than that?! Honestly you act like I'm stupid! But I'm writing you that way on purpose.
Kuno: What do you mean writing me that way...
S'rac: I AM writing all of this.
Kuno: FOOL! SILENCE YOUR NONSENSE!!*Hits him over the head with his bokken*
S'rac: OWCHIES!!! I am soon getting my own bokken, Kuno! Then we can duel!
Kuno: You dare challenge my prowess?!
S'rac: No it just sounds like fun to duel with swords. I haven't in a while. Well.....never with REAL swords, but that's beside the point.....
Kuno: Ha! Such a jest! You, with no real practice with such an honorable wapon would challenge ME?! It is to laugh!*Proceeds to laugh*
S'rac: Ummm......Yes? It shall be muse vs. muse! Since I'm Jeril's muse and...other people's too.....part time at least. Ah yes. I was Jeril's muse first. Ah yes I remember that day.....*Screen goes all wavy, heralding a flashback*
Kuno: Oh no you don't! I shalln't allow this!*Stops the flashback*
S'rac: Awwwww! I wanted to have a flashback!
Kuno: Feh! I shall not allow such a thing. The only one who shall be allowed to flash back around here is me!
S'rac: Hey! Who's who's muse here?!
Kuno: I AM NOT YOUR MUSE!! STRIKE!! STRIKE!! STRIKE!! STRIKE!! STRIKE!! STRIKE!! STRIKE!! STRIKE!! STRIKE!! STRIKE!!
S'rac: GAAAAH!!*Amazingly dodges his attacks* Wahaha! I'm getting used to this!
Kuno: Blast! You shall pay for this!!*Ground suddenly rumbles* Hm??
S'rac: Wha?*Ground explodes from under them* Gah!
Kuno: What is this?!
Ryoga: Where am I now.....?
S'rac: Um.....in the middle of my review.....
Ryoga: What are you talking about?
Kuno: So it is you!
Ryoga: You! What are you doing here?!
Kuno: Ask him.*Points at S'rac*
S'rac: He's my muse!*Is thwacked over the head*
Kuno: I AM NOT YOUR MUSE!!!
Ryoga: Hah! Enslaved eh?
Kuno: I am NOT you fool!
Ryoga: You wanna fight?! Bring it on!*Takes out his extremely heavy extremely cool umbrella*
Kuno: Such a jest!*Lunges at Ryoga*
*Fight with their Bokken and Umbrella*
S'rac: *Rubs his hands together evilly*Yes...Perhaps I can make Ryoga my muse toooo.....Oh how evil I am.......Well don't tell them. Mwahahahahahahahaha...*Laughs softly but evilly* Oh well even if I don't make him my muse it's an evil plan. Hmmm...Or maybe I can have guest stars every review! Hehe. Well either way, great chappy! I can't wait for moooore! C ya lata(later)!
S'rac, Kuno, and Ryoga*Fighting* | Reviewed By: Epona On: October 15, 2002 17:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Epona: Hola!!! Heehee!!! I'm in it, i'm in it!!! *jumps up and down excitedly*
Nika: Well, she's hyper...
Epona: HeEhEe I aM oF cOuRsE!!!
Jenna: *sweatdrop* Settle down...
Epona: *stops jumping* Okie ^^
Jenna: Good author.
DW: Hello, Moo
Nika: *sweatdrops* Oh great him again...
DW: Shut up...
Epona: Oh well...i wanna see how long i can get this...
DW: Bye bye, moo *disappears*
Epona: Awwwww...
DW: *shows up again* Moo
Epona: Yay!
DW: Moo *disappears again*
Epona: Grrr!! Make up ur mind!!!
Megan: Oh well...at least he's gone
Epona: But i wanna try making a REALLY long one this time... T_T but no ideas come to me.
Kayla: Haahaa
Epona: *hits her with the Baseball Bat of Pain* Haahaa this! Anyway, I like it!!! And I think the mystery person is... CHICHI!!! She's the only one it COULD be!!!
Kayla: *_* Owwwww...
Nika: Hey does anyone wanna see Bob?
Megan: No!!! Bob is strictly forbidden to invade any reviews, remember?
Nika: Oh yeah...
Kayla: Haha!!!
Nika: Oh shut it, Kayla
Kayla: Heehee ^_^ Guess what?
Epona: I refuse to
Kayla: -_-"
Epona: Heehee ^_^V
Kayla: I'll tell you anyway.
Epona: -_-"
Kayla: Heehee ^_^ You have homework to do
Epona: AAAHH!!! I FORGOT!!! GEOMETRY!!!
Megan: That was mean of you, Kayla
Kayla: Well actually I thought it was nice of me to remind her so she wouldn't be up till 1 in the morning again
Epona: Guess I'll write a long one next time okie? byes! | Reviewed By: stina On: October 14, 2002 01:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
heehee now i'm reviewing to be the 31st person and to laugh at the button that says submit...
creepy aín't it?
i think so and so should you, the pudding shooting give me the green avocado pudding shooter....
okay now i really need to go sleep
ja
stina-chan | Reviewed By: stina-chan On: October 14, 2002 01:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
i decided to be special and be the 30th reviewer for the bootcamp fic,
since its so totally awesome and such things like that....
i'm tired i must go now and sleep,
come Piccolo action figure we move...
stina-chan | Reviewed By: lady_shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 15:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ Wow, that's hilarious! POST MORE OR I'LL BURN MY SCIENCE PROJECT! | Reviewed By: BananaGirl On: October 15, 2002 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, how could you keep us in suspense like that??!! Um...is it Chi Chi? I guess Chi Chi! Duuuuuuuuuude, did you know Mousse has black hair? And super cool thick glasses!
Quorky: What is this new obsession?
I dunno! I have a thing for scrawny, small dudes with thick glasses. I am ill!
Quorky: Yes, ill in the head.
Oh ha ha. *Grabs cap of Quorky's head* AHA!
Quorky: What the hell? *quickly covers his lime green cap=hair* What are you trying to do?
What's this? *Picks up Bulma manga*
Quorky: I've never seen it in my life!
Yeah, and I don't want to fuck Vegeta.
Quorky: Thanks for sharing that.
No probs ^_^ Well, looks like I'll have to confiscate this.
Quorky: *grumbles*
Muwahahahahahaha | Reviewed By: stina On: October 05, 2002 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
CHECK IT! i'm no longer blocked from mediaminer.org
life is wonderfull...but now that i got this site working i can't seem to get any other site working...
shakes head, shit all computer,
*shrug* oh well i'll fic it later i'm not sure how to use the HTML tags but neh i'll figure it out
now hopefully the text above is red....anyways GO PLATOON PICCOLO YOU CAN DO IT,
i think for that i deserve some kind of weapon...preferably a pudding shooter that shoots green avocado flavored pudding....yum
but nows i got's to go so laters everyone
stina-chan | Reviewed By: DiamondSky17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: Geta
Platoon: Goten (I feel sorry for him that he doesn't even have one)
Hair Color: Bangs are purple, and bright red streaks in the rest of my brown hair.
Eye color: Hazel (change color to mood)
Personality: Shy at first, but then is really out going and hyper. Hates to be lied, and taken advatage from.
Height: Medium | Reviewed By: Arty On: October 03, 2002 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Arty: HI ME AGAIN AND YES THIS WILL BE THE LONGEST REVIEW EVER.
I PROMISE YOU THAT.
IN FACT IT WILL BE LONGER THE MOST OF THE CHAPTERS I HAVE EVER WRITTEN FOR MY
STORIES!
AND 2 START THIS OFF…
THAT WASN’T EVEN A REAL REVIEW.
YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE…Lady thingy
I MEAN COME ON…
I RULE I RULE I RULE…FOR 39 PAGES THAT’S JUST SAD
SOUNDS LIKE SOMEONE’S TO FULL OF THEMSELVES (No Offence)
BY ANY CHANCE ARE YOU A RULER?
NOT A KING OR QUEEN BUT A PIECE OF PLASTIC THAT YOU USE TO DRAW STRAIGHT LINES
WITH
^_^
Ha no one can beat me; I will be victorious over Tanti and this person who
thinks they rule should try to write a review worth being in the competition (no
offence) It just ticks me off how some people can be sooo inconsiderate, please
you would make a worthy adversary if you could write a conversation with your
muse or something.
Guess what my songs I downloaded…there’s to many so I’ll just tell you.
Avril Lavigne = Complicated
Avril Lavigne = Sk8er boi
Blaque = As if
Blink 182 = Adam’s song
Bring it on = Freaking you
Bring it on = Clovers Regional Cheer
Bring it on = Hey Mickey
Bring it on =We’re cheerleaders (I’m sexy, I’m Cute)
Bring it on = Toro’s final cheer
Bring it on/ Daphne and Celeste = U.G.L.Y
Chad Kroeger/ Josey Scott = Hero
Eminem = Cleaning out my closet
Creed = My Sacrifice
Creed = What if
Creed = With arms wide open
DBZ = Rock the dragon
Dbz = The starting after that
KC & Joe Jo = All my life
Limp Bizkit = My way
Limp Bizkit = My Generation
Limp Bizkit = Rollin’
Linkin Park = In the End
Mary J. Blidge = No more Drama
Michelle Branch = All you wanted
Michelle Brach = Everywhere
Papa Rouch = Last Resort
Papa Rouch = She loves me not
Pearl Jam = Where can my baby be
P.O.D = Youth of the Nation
Puff Daddy and Faith Evans = Every step I take
Shakira = Objection/Tango
Sir Mix-A-Lot = I like big butts
The Calling = Where ever you will go
Gorillaz = Clint Eastwood
Arty: There’ll be heaps of spelling mistakes in there, but I like those songs.
Wow that’s like a page already
Taigore: She’s gone insane
Twitch: No she’s just revenge crazy
Taigore: I thought she already beat Tanti again.
Twitch: Yeah but she feels that’s not enough, she’s goin to create a record
review all single spaced, that even she’d have trouble breaking
Taigore: Oh, she’s insane
Twitch: No I just explained that
Arty: I WILL HAVE MY REVENGE!
Taigore: I repeat, She’s insane
Twitch: NO SHE JUST WANTS REVENGE ON TANTI
Taigore: Jeez calm down, don’t need to get your scales in a knot
Twitch: O do shut up.
Taigore: No
Arty: Move in, now move out
Hands up, now hands down.
Back up, Back up
Tell me whatcha gunna do now
Breath in now breath out
Hands up now hands down
Back up, Back up
Tell me whatcha gunna do now
Taigore: well first that’s the most ridiculous dance I’ve ever heard, and I’m
not doing it, and what I’m going to do now is argue against everything you and
Twitch says, unless it’s intelligent ‘cos then I’ll agree with you and argue
against the person who doesn’t.
Twitch: No you dumbass, that’s part of the chorus from Rolling by Limp Bizkit,
she wasn’t actually asking you to dance and what you were going to do now, like
she’d care.
Taigore: She would to
Twitch: Not
Taigore: would
Twitch: Not
Taigore: Would
Arty: Shut up, this my review
Twitch: Fine
Taigore: Yeah all right, just for now
Arty: I AM THE ULTIMATE YOUTH OF THE NATION, THIS IS THE WAY THE STORY GOES!
Taigore: You that makes no sense
Twitch: It’s out of P.O.D’s Youth of the nation dumbass
Taigore: Still makes no sense
Twitch: It’s not in that order, she’s just combined two of the sentences
together, and added a few words in or changed a few words.
Taigore: I still say it makes no sense
Arty: You think you’re special, I can see it in your eyes, I can see it when you
laugh at me, look down at me, and walk around on me.
Taigore: We don’t do that do we?
Twitch: Oh man I can’t win with you Taigore
Taigore: yeah I know
Arty: That’s Limp Bizkit’s My way for your information.
**Ground starts to shake**
Taigore: What’s that?
Twitch: Duh, It’s an earthquake
Arty: No you’re wrong Twitch…It’s the evil idea that came out of S’rac’s
head…The Giant Panda.
Twitch: **suspiciously** and what did S’rac make this Giant Panda do?
Arty: **shrugs** O he just thought it could attack you that’s all.
Twitch: That’s all?
Arty: Yeah I think so
Twitch: That’s not very nice
Arty: yeah I know
Twitch: You and this S’rac aren’t very nice people are you.
Arty: Depends which way you put it
Taigore: Well your evil
Arty: Oh yeah we know that, but in a nice way remember
Twitch: Jeez
Taigore: **being pulled up by the tail by the giant panda** **yowls**
OOOOOOOWWWWW
Twitch: Arty! Do something
Arty: Like what?
Twitch: I don’t know something
Arty: You know that’s not very helpful
Twitch: Then it’s up to me!
**Twitch flies through the air Atom ant style, well as good as a Dragon can
trying to be Atom ant**
Taigore: Get me down from here
Twitch: Don’t worry I’ll Save you Taigore
Taigore: Oh I wonder why I’m not relieved
Arty: Don’t hurt the Giant Panda remember, he’s an endangered species
Taigore: **raises an eyebrow while swinging upside down by tail from the Panda’s
Hand**
I’m suspended in the air, and all you can think about is not hurting an
endangered species?
Arty: If you want to put it like that
**Twitch lands on Giant Panda’s head and starts burning it’s ears, the panda is
surprised and drops Taigore, but starts swatting at his head**
Taigore: I wonder what Panda tastes like?
Arty: NO TAIGORE YOU CAN NOT EAT THE PANDA!
Taigore: I don’t care what you say Arty, I’m going to
**Starts gnawing on Panda’s foot**
Twitch: How’s lunch Taigore?
Taigore: **mouth full** Not bad, you want some
Twitch: I’ll grill mine first a?
Taigore: **mouth full** yeah I don’t care
**Half an hour, several hundred burps on Taigore’s and Twitch’s department, and
a bucket full of tears and vomit on Arty’s behalf, later**
Taigore: That was nice
Twitch: Yeah we should have Chinese more often
Arty: You two make me sick
Taigore: Yeah so we noticed
Twitch: Yeah who would have guessed your stomach could hold so much Arty?
Arty: Don’t you two, I don’t want to hear it
Taigore: But we want to say it
Twitch: Yeah
Arty: and zippit
Taigore: As if
Twitch: Get a grip Arty
Arty: I will…on both of your necks if you’re not quiet
Twitch: Fine
Taigore: I feel like I’m diagonally parked in a parallel universe sometimes
Twitch: what’s that got to do with the price of fish?
Taigore: Fish where?
Arty: He’s like a vicious Chihuahua thing, except from the cat family
Twitch: What on earth?
Arty: Sorry I was compelled
Twitch: You know what’s a good saying?
Taigore: **still looking for the fish**
Arty: what?
Twitch: The early bird gets the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese in
the trap
Arty: No, you’re wrong
Twitch: Way to bust my bubble
Arty: I like bubbles
Taigore: Why would you like that idiotic monkey?
Arty: Not him, you no the things you get from soap and bubblegum.
Taigore: **chasing his tail** You humans are sooo easily amused
Arty: Hard work pays off in the future, laziness pays off now, so why are you
working so hard on catching your tail?
Taigore: You that’s soooo lame
Arty: Lame is my middle name, actually it’s Ashley, but we won’t go there
Twitch: Good
Arty: It’s not like you have anything good to say
Twitch: Actually I do…wrap your minds around this… You know why you find
something in the last place you look, ‘cos when you find it, you stop looking.
Taigore: You that’s sooo true
Twitch: I know
Arty: You consider that good?
Twitch: Yeah
Arty: You’re an idiot
Twitch: **Wailing** Waaaaa, I wish I was never artificially created in a lab
Arty: You weren’t
Twitch: huh?
Arty: You weren’t artificially created in a lab, you were artificially in my
imagination
Taigore: BBUURRNNEEDD
Twitch: Oh do shut up, I was quoting Seth Green in Austin Powers.
Arty: ooh he is soooo cute, except at the end of Austin Powers Goldmember
Taigore: Man you need a hobby girl
Arty: That’s what I keep saying
Taigore: I want to be at the all you can eat buffet early, so I can get good
food
Arty: The early bird gets the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese in the
trap
Twitch: What’s that got to do with anything?
Arty: **smiling evilly** Well…Taigore wants to go to the all you can eat buffet,
but birds don’t go to them, so they catch and eat worms, but there tends to be
an awfully large amount of birds out catching worms, so the early bird catches
the worm, ‘cos if they get there late, there will be no worms left. But if a
mouse uses the same approach for cheese in a trap he will most probably get
killed.
Therefore the first mouse to try and get the cheese out of the trap will be
killed when the metal thing comes forward and kills it. But the second mouse
won’t be in any danger from the arm thingy ‘cos it will be pinning the first
mouse down.
So he goes up and takes the cheese, hence the second mouse gets the cheese in
the trap part.
Twitch: That didn’t explain anything
Arty: Oh
Taigore: Yeah, so can I go to the buffet?
Arty: No, ‘cos you didn’t get my inspiring speech
Taigore: Gee thanks Twitch
Twitch: Your welcome
Taigore: You’re such a little weasel sometimes Twitch.
Twitch: But I’m a dragon
Taigore: You know what I mean
Twitch: And I suppose you consider yourself an eagle?
Arty: Eagles may soar, but weasels don’t get sucked into jet engines
Taigore and Twitch: rriigghhtt
Arty: I know I am you know its sooo cute when you guys speak at the same time.
Twitch: Humph
Taigore: I detest cute
Arty: Tough cookies, ‘cos you are, so that means you detest yourself
Taigore: You have stupid logic Arty
Arty: Says who?
Taigore: Says me
Twitch: And me
Arty: So? Like your opinions mean anything to me
Taigore: ooh crushed
Twitch: There you go, getting all egotistical on me again, both of you
Arty: Are you comparing me to him?
Twitch: Yeah
Arty: I condemn thee to hell
Taigore: Ha, you got condemned.
Arty: And I condemn thee, you freakish tiger
Taigore: Damned
Arty: Mwahahaha
**Loud Beeping is heard**
Taigore: What on earth is that?
Twitch: We’re on the brink of Hell; nothing can possibly make this situation any
worse then it already is.
Arty: I didn’t mean that you really were going to hell
Twitch: O ok, I forgive you then
Arty: I don’t need your forgiveness
**Buu truck reverses across the screen**
Arty: rriigghhtt
Taigore: Why would you want a truck that looks like Buu?
Twitch: I don’t know, but it’s wrong
Taigore: You can say that again
Twitch: I don’t know but that’s just wrong
Taigore: Smart-ass
Twitch: Hypocrite
Arty: **absentmindedly** There must be some kind of universal law preventing
those with an IQ beneath that of a carrot from breeding.
Taigore: You’re obsessed with carrots
Twitch: It’s unhealthy
Arty: Actually carrots are good for you, they help you see in the dark, and
improve your vision.
Taigore: Those are just old wives tales
Twitch: Yeah carrots don’t help you see in the dark
Arty: Yeah but they improve your vision, I mean have you ever seen a rabbit
wearing classes?
Taigore: No but they would if they had the technology, rabbits aren’t a very
technological advanced species.
Twitch: Yeah right on
Arty: you believe what you want
Taigore: I will, **clamps teeth down on Twitch’s tail**
Twitch: Owww, what was that for?
Taigore: ‘Cos I never properly got you back from wrecking my Kuno Plushie before
I had finished, ‘cos you said the beating didn’t hurt, and now you cried out in
front of an audience.
Twitch: You’re an ass
Taigore: Payback’s a bitch isn’t it?
Twitch: Where in hell did you learn that saying?
Taigore: Well I’ve never been up to hell, but I read it in one of Arty’s word
documents, I think that a whole heap of her stupid saying with be littered
throughout this review
Twitch: Ok…she’s a very weird person
Taigore: I wonder why that was there?
Twitch: I do NOT want to know
Taigore: On second thoughts…Neither do I…but I remember it was in a list of
weird sayings.
Twitch: rriigghhtt
Arty: But…where…what…when…how did you get there? I thought all my files were
encrypted.
Taigore: Yeah but it was fairly obvious what the password was…it was **Arty’s
hand covers Taigore’s mouth** Myhsdjmkds
Arty: Not a word Taigore…or I’ll make you wish you had gone to that planet of
Tiger eating potatoes
Taigore: eep
Arty: Ok?
Taigore: **nods furiously**
Arty: Good
Twitch: Don’t worry Arty Taigore has his own share of secrets…once I was reading
his diary…yes he has a diary…and this picture fell out of between 2 of the
pages.
I was like…But not THIS. Seeing THAT, I mean, that’s just WRONG. What cruel God
invented such torture for me?
It was horrible.
Arty: What was it?
Twitch: I don’t want to say it’s too horrible
Arty: It can’t be that bad
Twitch: Trust me it is.
Arty: okay…if you say so
Twitch: I do…it’s for your own well being it’s causing me serious psychological
damage.
Arty: I’ll pay for you to see a shrink…no wait the only good one was killed by
miss you know who.
Taigore: Ha, she’s always bugging you a Arty?
Arty: Yeah, she’s constantly a thorn in my side, and a pain in my ass
Taigore: No comment
Twitch: Yeah I agree with Taigore
Arty: Bu..No.yo..No..Bu.how…No…You…can
Taigore: You couldn’t speak coherently right now if your life depended on it!
Arty: Could to, see I just did
Twitch: BURNED!
Arty: You know Taigore you remind me of The Portuguese man-o’-war.
Taigore: Why? Because of its lethalness, it’s poetic beauty
Arty: Something like that…. The Portuguese man-o’-war, It’s 99% water. It has no
brain. No guts, and No Anus’
Twitch: **Rolls on the floor laughing**
Taigore: And why does that remind you of me
Arty: Cos it can
Taigore: Humph
Twitch: But that stuff about the Portuguese man-o’-war That’s a useless fact I’m
never goin to use
Arty: You never know, you may have a general knowledge quiz one day and that may
be one of the questions
Taigore: That’s seriously hard to believe.
Arty: I was reading a sweet as e-mail the other week or so, it had some of the
coolest little friendship quotes in it.
Twitch: Well lets hear them
Taigore: You know I’m just going to shoot them to pieces with my lethal barbs of
judgement
Arty: You think too highly of yourself
Taigore: And you having high self-esteem is bad?
Arty: No, but the constant trumpet blowing gets annoying
Twitch: okay lets hear these Friendship things.
Arty: A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.
Taigore: When really they’re only coming to scrounge money off you when you are
too depressed to say no
Arty: If all my friends were to jump off a cliff, I wouldn't jump with them; I'd
be at the bottom to catch them.
Taigore: When really you’re just being stupid ‘cos they want to end their lives,
and you are preventing them from doing that. And besides they wouldn’t do the
same thing for you.
Arty: **growling** Everyone hears what you say. Friends listen to what you say.
Best friends listen to what you don't say.
Taigore: Only because they are trying to pick up juicy pieces of gossip about
you, and stuff that they can you do blackmail you, and Best friends don’t listen
to what you don’t say they just want you to say something so you can leave them
alone
Arty: You are a very sad tiger you know that
Taigore: Yes I had a very deprived childhood.
Twitch: You’re such an ass
Taigore: Shut up, you’re ruining my acting piece.
Arty: It wasn’t very good anyway
Taigore: What would you know?
Arty: That if you performed that in public, your audience would be deader then
the deadest thing that ever died
Twitch: Ouch, that’s harsh girl
Arty: I’m a very harsh person
Taigore: Alas, my talent is not appreciated in this realm, goodbye cruel world
**falls over dramatically**
Arty: Get up you ass
Taigore: Fine, but not ‘cos you said, its because I fell on a rock and it was
uncomfortable down there
Twitch: Arty you’re not very fair to Taigore
Arty: What’s not fair, is in ones own perspective
Taigore: who are you a martial arts sensei…
Arty: No S’rac rubbed off on me when he gave me and friend a lecture on Ranma ½
Taigore: Ooh that’s scary
Arty: Tell me about it
Twitch: Being scared does funny things to your mind…
Arty: How do you think I’ve lost so much?
Taigore: ‘Cos you’re forgetful
Twitch: ‘Cos people are always nicking your stuff?
Arty: NO! ‘Cos I get scared a lot, and that does funny stuff to your mind…think
about it
Taigore: Nah thinking hurts my head
Twitch: I’ve lied to you
Taigore: I’ve lied to you to so we’re even
Twitch: I meant to Arty
Arty: Don’t worry I’ve lied to you to so never mind
Twitch: You people are too weird
Arty: I can’t wait to see tomorrow
Taigore: What’s happening tomorrow?
Arty: I don’t know, it just might be better then today
Twitch: Today wasn’t so bad
Arty: yeah but tomorrow might be better then today
Taigore: You realise that tomorrow will be today tomorrow
Arty: don’t I already have a huge headache
Twitch: aw nobody cares
Arty: You know what my favourite line out of a song is
Taigore: No, but I have a feeling you’re going to tell us
Arty: I can’t breath when you cry, but I’ll be there to hold you tight,
I think that is sooo sweet
Twitch: You would
Taigore: what song is that out of?
Arty: I DON’T KNOW! I DON’T KNOW WHO SINGS IT EITHER!
Twitch: That’s sad
Arty: I know
Twitch: at least you’re not in denial
Arty: **shuts eyes** it’s so sad
Taigore: Open you eyes and deal with it
Arty: I am dealing with it
Twitch: Open your eyes, or else you’ll hurt yourself, and then we’ll get the
blame
Arty: Fine
Twitch: We fight what we don’t understand
Taigore: That’s very philosophical of you
Twitch: Thanks
Arty: I don’t understand you so does that mean I fight you?
Twitch: Verbally yes
Arty: Oh too true
Twitch: Yeah I know
Arty: Tears are worthless, Revenge is priceless
Twitch: What brought that on?
Taigore: Then why do you cry and not get revenge when people say his name?
Arty: I don’t know
Taigore: Well you suck
Arty: Don’t you start
Twitch: Yeah out of the gutter people
Taigore: **Snickers** The power of suggestion, it brings people to their knees
Twitch: **shudders** Taigore you just keep adding to the perverted images that
you managed to succeed in putting in my head.
Taigore: Mwahahaha
Arty: Stop it Taigore or I’ll hurt you
Taigore: It takes more then what you’ve got to threaten me
Arty: You that’s a line out of song, you the one I don’t what it’s called and
who sings it.
Twitch: Yeah but I can threaten you
Taigore: I’m not scared of you
Twitch: You are to
Taigore: If I die, everyone else is going to die with me
Twitch: and how are you gunna do that?
Arty: Oi stop using my sayings, ‘cos when I take over the world if all my
sayings have been used up, I’ll sound like a stereo type.
Twitch: So I see you had no intention of killing everyone if you died, that was
Arty’s idea.
Taigore: There’s nothing you can do or take from me
Twitch: really? Then you won’t mind if I remove your tail? You can live without
that right.
Taigore: **Hugging his tail** No leave my beautiful tail alone.
Twitch: Ha, so you lied?
Arty: You’re about to loose the duel of I’m not scaredness game
Taigore: Yes I lied
Arty: You lost
Twitch: You’re doomed to be undone
Taigore: I swear I’ll be the one to bring you down
Arty: Not before I bring both of you down
Twitch: You couldn’t even if you tried
Arty: I don’t need your negativity
Taigore: No one does
Twitch: But their going to get it anyway
Arty: I’m a black belt in origami, I could take you down in a second
Taigore: So you are like a sensei?
Twitch: So you lied…it wasn’t just S’rac rubbing off on you
Arty: Shut up, everyone thinks you two are sooo nice, you’re not so nice
Twitch: We know
Taigore: Who thinks we’re nice, we’re not nice
Arty: yeah I just said that
Twitch: Arty you’re really annoying
Arty: I know
Taigore: Don’t encourage her
Arty: The whole swirl of technological colours in a universe of unknown
intellect
Twitch: What the hell?
Arty: Your pathetic unnourished, under formed brain, could not comprehend
Taigore: Umm have you taken your pills today?
Arty: Who told you?!
Taigore: Don’t get your knickers in a twist
Arty: I will if I want
Twitch: Okay
**I dedicate the next 5 pages to Tanti and how much of a Baka she is**
Arty: Mwahahaha
Taigore: You seriously don’t like her do you?
Arty: Actually I don’t mind Tanti, it’s not my fault that I write longer reviews
then her.
Twitch: You realise she wants to kill you
Arty: so? Who doesn’t?
Taigore: good point
Arty: I always make good points
Twitch: Whatever you want to believe big ears
Arty: ^_^
Taigore: Why are you smiling?
Arty: I don’t need a reason
Twitch: So what about Tanti?
Arty: Dim-witted psychotic freak, I don’t have time to deal with her craziness
Taigore: ^_^;;;;
Twitch: I wonder about you sometimes
Arty: why? I’ve always been this mental
Taigore: yeah but it’s not good for your health or for those around you
Arty: No, I’m a good kind of mental
Twitch: Sure Big ears
Taigore: In three words sum up your feelings for Tanti
Arty: Mutual
Taigore: I said three words
Arty: well I only said one, do you have a problem with that?
Taigore: Not particularly, it’s just the principal of the thing.
Twitch: Yeah it’s like the number one rule for everything
Arty: What is?
Twitch: I don’t know, but there is a rule for everything
Arty: yeah know matter how much you try to change them, my muses are idiots.
Twitch: I’ve said it once, and I’ll say it again, that’s not very nice
Arty: I’m not a very nice person
Taigore: That everyone knows
Arty: In fact I’m prone to violent mood swings
Twitch: yeah I remember when you turned into the cleanliness freak mood, you
scrubbed me so hard, then you pinned me on the washing line by my ears.
Arty: How many times do I have to say it…I’M SORRY
Taigore: It’s just fun to see you pleading **evil grin**
Arty: I am going to hurt you so much
Twitch: Arty, why are you writing this incredibly long review?
Arty: To bug Tanti and to get her to admit that I am the long review queen
Taigore: Yeah that will happen when hell freezes over
Arty: Yeah, but she can’t compete with my brilliance
Twitch: Oh yes that is an incredibly hard battle to win **rolls eyes**
Arty: You’re just jealous
Taigore: I know I am **shakes head**
Arty: Sometimes I wonder why I put up with your insolence
Twitch: you know that saying sounded so familiar
Taigore: yeah I can’t place it though
Arty: Oh do shut up **folds arms**
Taigore: You know you love us
Twitch: You wouldn’t be able to live without us
Arty: Really? What make you think that? I’d say it was the other way round. If I
die, goes insane or stop believing in you then you cease to exist.
Twitch: Yet again she has a good point
Taigore: Don’t remind me
Arty: Mwahahaha
Taigore: Her head’s not going to be able to fit through the door soon if you
keep going
Twitch: Yeah just what we need another big headed person around here
Taigore: Who’s the other one?
Twitch: **Gazes at Taigore with a look that says…DON’T PLAY DUMB WITH ME**
Arty: I will not have a big head, I’m too cool to have a big head
Twitch: **sighs** It just won’t end
Taigore: So how much longer is this review going to go on?
Arty: Umm a long time
Twitch: why are you putting us through this torture?
Arty: I’m sorry but I wasn’t going to have a conversation with myself
Taigore: Fair enough
Arty: And now I’m getting writer’s block here to, I have writer’s block
concerning my story to.
Twitch: Yeah but remember you have babbled on for almost 20 pages about nothing.
Taigore: yeah you’re just running out of things to say.
Arty: Yeah you guys are sooo supportive
Taigore: See I knew you couldn’t live without us
Arty: I was just starting to get on with you, don’t make me take back that
well-earned trust
Twitch: Yeah that would be a shame
Arty: I don’t think I can make it to twenty pages…I can’t go on.
Taigore: **shakes Arty** DON’T YOU QUIT ON ME ARTY!
Twitch: Stay strong girl
Arty: I’ll never let go Jack, I’ll never let go
Twitch: okay that’s just wrong, Titanic should stay sunk
Arty: That’s sad
Taigore: Twitch doesn’t have a happy bone in her body
Twitch: I do to, that’s why I say Ha so much
Taigore: That’s not happy, that’s just pathetic
Arty: yeah
Twitch: Look who’s talking, girl who writes long reviews so she can be queen of
the long reviews, and freaky tiger boy who is just naturally pathetic.
Arty: Can we stop fighting, we’re so close to twenty pages
Twitch: Can we count like Tanti and cheat
Taigore: No we will not sink to her level
Arty: Yeah we have too much class
Twitch: So Arty are you going to ask for a Plushie?
Taigore: Everyone else is
Arty: I don’t know
Twitch: why not?
Taigore: I mean you could have a really cute plushie
Arty: I’m not really a plushie person
Taigore: Everyone loves plushies
Arty: You just want me to get one so you can chew on it
Taigore: Who me?
Arty: yes you
Twitch: Yeah that’s a good point
Taigore: I promise I won’t
Arty: is that promise worth anything?
Taigore: Yes
Twitch: Are you going to get a plushie or not?
Arty: Not yet…maybe I’ll get my own plushie later
Twitch: If you get one what one would you get?
Arty: Well S’rac reckons I should get two plushies one of each of you, but why
would I want that?
Taigore: Who wouldn’t?
Arty: I’ll ignore that, then we got into an argument about whether my Taigore
plushie when brought to life would eat his live Kuno plushie.
Taigore: And the result was…?
Arty: I can’t remember **falls over anime styles**
Taigore: Then why did you bring it up?
Twitch: That’s obvious
Arty: Yeah any idiot could see I’m filling in space
Taigore: Guess I’m not any idiot
Arty: You’re impossible
Twitch: No, You’re super impossible.
Arty: You’re an extra extra double jerk, sorry I watch Charmed
Taigore: Yeah we know
Twitch: I mean we go everywhere with you, do we not?
Arty: Yeah but I only met you a few days ago
Twitch: Oh but we’ve been with you for years…
Taigore: Just waiting for you to notice us
Arty: Wow you guys are patient
Twitch: No, we had a little fun through the years
Taigore: Yeah, all the bad stuff in your life that has ever occurred was mainly
us, trying to get you to notice us.
Arty: Why I should kill you… do you have any idea how many times I almost died?
Taigore: Yeah we were the ones who helped you to get better to
Twitch: Yeah, we didn’t mean to almost kill you.
Arty: **glares**
Taigore: I swear on my honour as a tiger
Twitch: and me on the magic of dragons
Arty: All right I’ll let you off the hook next time, but if you ever attempt to
seriously harm me again…I will feed you to carnivorous potatoes.
Twitch: Yes ma’am
Taigore: Aw this means we can have no more fun
Twitch: Use those fluffy things on the top of your head called ears, she said
attempt to seriously, she said nothing about accidents or little harm
Taigore: Mwahahaha you just made my day Twitch
Twitch: I made my day to.
Arty: Yeah I think I’ll actually write something about J’dee’s story now, just
so she realises I do actually read it, and I’m not just reviewing to make cheap
shots at Tanti
Taigore: But you do make cheap shots at Tanti
Arty: Yeah but that’s not all I do, you know that, why else would I bug J’dee
online about stuff happening in the story
Twitch: ‘Cos you’re an annoying person
Arty: Other then that
Twitch: No idea
Taigore: Me either
Arty: Well there ya go
Arty: Anyway J’dee great chapter, it ruled, and I can’t wait for the next
chapter.
Hint, Hint
Write the next part or you’ll never hear the end of it.
Yeah I know you are, but hey I feel I have to comment
Taigore: Is that enough?
Arty: Yeah I think so
Twitch: It wasn’t very much compared to the rest of the review
Arty: But J’dee likes my reviews
Taigore: Are you sure about that?
Arty: Yeah she said they were funny…I think
Taigore: Do you now? That’s new information for me
Arty: Shut up **whacks Taigore with a carrot**
Twitch: And you have weird powers…I mean come on the power to summon vegetables?
Arty: Well at least in an emergency I’ll never go hungry
Taigore: But I’m always with you, and I don’t like Veggies
Arty: Well that’s your problem
Taigore: My problem…I HAVE A PROBLEM!?
Arty: Several is more like it
Taigore: But me…the perfection of Taigore…tainted by problems…
Arty: **snorts** Perfect
Taigore: I need to get this sorted
Arty: To err is human, oh wait you’re not human…Ha, you have a problem
Taigore: You’re not perfect
Arty: More perfect then you
Twitch: That’s not saying much, and I’m more perfect then both of you.
Arty: In your dreams maybe, but I created both of you so that means you
inherited your perfection from me.
Taigore: That’s not true
Arty: Prove it
Taigore: You prove it’s true
Arty: I don’t need to prove anything to anyone
Twitch: ^_~ are you sure?
Arty: Oh do shut your mouth, I don’t have anything to prove
Taigore: We believe you
Arty: HEY, WHOO, I MADE IT to PAGE 20
Taigore: Hey well done, you never answered whether you were going to get a
plushie or not
Arty: Later
Taigore: Promise
Arty: You realise that it will not be your personal chew toy if I do get one
Taigore: Yes
Arty: Then yes I promise to get one
Twitch: What plushie?
Arty: I don’t know, anything, but if it’s Kuno, I’ll let you both rip it to
shreds, how does that sound?
Taigore: Cool
Twitch: It’s all-good
Arty: Kool
Taigore: I’m bored
Twitch: Yeah what are we going to talk about for 19 more pages?
Arty: I don’t know…
Taigore: So can’t we end this now?
Arty: No I refuse to yield to the bakas
Twitch: You are a very angry person
Taigore: yeah anger management classes all round
Arty: No, I can deal with my anger by myself
Taigore: Yeah but it would be funny to see you getting professional help
Arty: I’ve had professional help before
Twitch: The school guidance counsellor does not count
Arty: Oh well then I have from the doctor
Taigore: You and your stupid human doctors
Arty: What’s wrong with them
Twitch: Well they exist
Arty: So do you
Taigore: Yeah only for you though
Arty: And I’m supposed to feel touched by this?
Twitch: No you’re supposed to be extremely flattered
Arty: Why would you guys flatter me?
Twitch: No reason
Taigore: You’re just supposed to be
Arty: well I’m not
Taigore: And the harsh barbs of Arty’s indifference cut into us all
Twitch: And alas the blood loss shall kill us all
Arty: what a pity
Taigore: You’re not even going to try and save us?
Arty: Why would I bother doing that?
Twitch: ‘Cos you’re a lovely person who loves us
Arty: **snorts** Yeah sure I am
Twitch: truly you are
Arty: That’s not what you were saying at the start of the review
Twitch: Things change
Arty: you don’t
Taigore: Ouch…very ouch
Arty: I’m sorry Austin
Taigore: What the hell?
Arty: You said a line of Austin Powers 2 the spy who shagged me
Twitch: You humans and your demented sources of entertainment
Taigore: Yeah I mean why do you people bother with this reading and writing
Arty: ‘Cos it tends to get interesting
Taigore: You’re delusional
Arty: Not I’m not, take Boot Camp for example
Taigore: An enormous waste of time and energy
Arty: Why is that?
Taigore: ‘Cos me and Twitch aren’t in it
Arty: And that would make it all the better?
Twitch: Do you have a better idea?
Arty: I wasn’t the one who said it needed changing
Taigore: Why aren’t we in it?
Arty: Because it’s a Dragonballz fanfiction, not a freakish blue and orange
tiger, and demented sidekick the pink dragon fanfiction
Taigore: but we have fans
Arty: Yeah like whom?
Twitch: Er…
Arty: Just like I thought
Taigore: But these characters like Kuno and Heero are in it
Arty: yeah but they’re just plushies
Taigore: Oh…what about these muse things…we’re muses to
Arty: Yeah but I told J’dee that she didn’t have to put you in Boot Camp
Taigore: What did you do a stupid thing like that for? Twitch and I could have
made it sooo much more interesting
Arty: It’s already interesting enough as it is, and besides, J’dee doesn’t need
to think up things for you and things for you to say
Taigore: Why not…she sounds bored half the time
Arty: ‘Cos it’s hard enough writing a fanfiction with a few dozen characters in
it, let alone with you two psycho muses involved
Taigore: It couldn’t be that hard
Arty: It is…there’s a lot involved
Taigore: Like what?
Arty: Writer’s block, ideas, brainstorming, plot, ending, cliffhangers, the list
goes on
Taigore: You’re just making excuses to stop us from being in the story
Arty: So what if I am, what are you going to do about?
Taigore: **sits and thinks**
Arty: This may take awhile
Taigore: Arty, aren’t you afraid of cats?
Arty: No
Taigore: well allergic then?
Arty: Kinda, they don’t make me sneeze anymore, but if they scratch me, my skin
puffs up around where I’ve been scratched
Taigore: Well I’ll scratch you until I’m in the story
Arty: I’m not afraid of that
Taigore: Why?
Arty: ‘Cos I only have four main weaknesses, and one of them I have overcome for
the time being, and cat scratches are not on my list
Twitch: Arty…
Arty: What now Twitch?
Twitch: What are your weaknesses
Arty: I may look like a ditz, but I’m not
Twitch: Please
Arty: No, I will not tell you, or you’ll be exploiting them all you can
Taigore: Never
Twitch: Would we do that?
Arty: Yes
Taigore: I feel hurt, you don’t trust us
Arty: No
Twitch: Ooh way to put it bluntly girl
Arty: Well it’s the truth
Taigore: Still my feelings could have been spared, but no you’re relentless,
you’re like a steamroller, you just rolled over my feelings, squashing them flat
Arty: You know if you were a girl, you’d be a real Drama queen
Twitch: But since you’re a guy, I guess you’re a drama King
Taigore: **Goes all starry eyed** I’m a King?
Arty: Twitch…don’t
Twitch: Yes
Taigore: Mwahahaha, I’m a King, world bow down to me and my awesome power and
perfection
Arty: Shut up
Taigore: You dare to talk to your sovereign that way?
Arty: You’re not my sovereign
Taigore: Of course I am, I am everyone’s sovereign
Arty: Nope, I’m afraid you’re mistaken
Taigore: Do I need to teach you a lesson?
Arty: DO I need to teach you one?
Taigore: How would you do that?
Arty: I would hang you out by your tail on a washing line
Taigore: You wouldn’t dare
Arty: I would to
Taigore: How about I hang you out by your tail
Arty: who says I have a tail?
Taigore: **looks at Arty suspiciously**
Arty: Hehehe
Twitch: Yeah this is getting old
Arty: Tell me about it
Twitch: Yeah but you have to keep writing ‘cos mediaminer is being evil and
won’t let you submit your review so now you can make it longer for revenge
Arty: I wonder why I didn’t think of that?
Taigore: WHY ARE YOU IGNORING YOUR KING?
Arty: True, but what am I going to talk about?
Taigore: DON’T IGNORE ME!
Twitch: You could always list your music videos about Dragonballz that you have
downloaded and what they’re about.
Arty: why would anyone want to know that?
Twitch: Who wants to know anything that you’re writing?
Arty: Good point
Taigore: WHY ARE YOU IGNORING ME?
Arty: **sighs** Look there is a plushie hiding in those bushes
Taigore: Where?
Arty: Go have a look
Taigore: **forgets about being a King and searches for plushie**
Arty: Well that got rid of him
Twitch: So there’s not really a plushie over there?
Arty: No, I just said that to get rid of our annoying ‘King’
Twitch: I see
Taigore: **comes back in** There is no plushie over there
Arty: Yeah I know
Taigore: oh
Arty: So here is my list of my downloaded Dragonballz music videos and what
they’re about, I didn’t make any of these, I know you don’t care about this, I’m
just filling in space.
1. All-star goes to Smashmouth’s all-star = About Dbz characters and how much
they kick ass, mainly Trunks beating Freiza
2. Blink182 goes to blink182’s don’t leave me = Random clips all thrown together
to make a wicked music video
3. Blink182-2 goes to blink182’s Adam’s song = All clips about Vegeta and how
sad his life was/is it ends with Frieza killing him, it’s one of my favourites
4. Bymyside goes to 3 doors down’s song, I think it’s called by my side = It’s
about Dbz movie 9 and the attack of Bojack, I love that movie, and it has some
cool clips in it
5. Crawling_dbz_music_video goes to Linkin Park’s crawling = It’s a tribute to
the 5 greatest Saiyans of all time, Gohan, Goku, Vegeta, Goten and Trunks, it’s
a whole heap of moments of parts of fights from all 5 characters, through most
of the sagas and movies
6. Enfugo I don’t know who this song is by = It’s a remix song, a whole heap of
songs joined together, it’s hilarious, clips go well with music.
7. End of the World by R.E.M = Mainly about Earth and lots of people through Dbz
getting blown up, and it being the end of the world as they know it, it’s a good
clip.
8. Eternal. I don’t know the song or who sings it but it’s so cool, I’ll write
the lyrics out soon, just to fill in space = It’s about Marai Trunks and the
hardships he went through, you’ll get it more when you see the lyrics, it’s
about him wishing he was better
9. Freiza Last Resort, goes to Papa Rouch’s Last Resort = About Goku’s and
Frieza’s fight on Namek, & Frieza’s Last Resort that backfired on him
10. Godsmack, Godsmack’s I stand alone = I don’t like this one as much, ‘cos
it’s not the whole song, it’s about mainly movie 9 again, and how Gohan did a
large amount of the fighting ‘cos he was the target
11. Hero, Chad Kroeger and Josey Scott’s Hero = About The Z fighter’s and their
battles and how they become heroes
12. If_I_Could, The Calling’s Wherever you will go = It’s about the fight with
Buu and Goku, Gohan, And Vegeta’s trials
13. Impression, I don’t know if this is the real name of the song, and the name
of the band or people who sing this eludes me, but it’s made by my favourite Dbz
Music Video makers Danny = It’s about the battle between Goku and Frieza
14. It’s going down, the song by Linkin park, it’s going down, I love that song
= It’s about movie 6, the battle against Cooler on New Namek, and the fight in
another movie between androids 14 and 15 and the Z fighters, and the fight with
Brolly, Buu to, and chinified Goku against some robots
15. KidrockGohan, It’s the song Bawitaba by Kid Rock = It’s a dedication to
Gohan’s fight between Cell and himself
16. Largerdb3k1, Larger then life by the backstreet boys = It’s about the
tournament before Movie 9’s attack of Bojack
17. Majinmovie, it’s from this day by machine head = Goku fights Majin Vegeta,
putting it simply
18. Mess, Mass amounts, I don’t know the title or who sings it = Super Saiyans
kick ass
19. Music of the Heart, N*SYNC AND GLORIA ESTAFAN’s music of the heart = Tribute
to Gohan and Piccolo, really sad and heart-warming
20. Musicvideo5, space people sings whatever it is that goes with the clips =
It’s about 4 Saiyans, Goku, Vegeta, Goku and Marai Trunks
21. Myresolution, I don’t know song or the singer = I CRIED AT THE END, IT WAS
JUST TO MUCH…THE WHOLE CLIP WAS SAD AND THE END JUST TRIGGERED ME.
Call me a wuss if you want, but it was sad.
It’s a country kind of song, with Gohan talking in parts, Goku talking at the
end
It’s about the events leading up to Goku’s death against Cell, song goes very
good with the clip.
22. Forgotten, It’s Forgotten by Linkin park = It’s the fight between Gohan and
Trunks in the future between the androids and them. It also has Gohan’s death in
it, and the aftermath of Goku’s death
23. In the end, In the end by Linkin Park = Lots of fighting, powering up and
Dbz characters dying
24. Onestepcloser, the song one step closer by Linkin Park = Bardock going up
against Freiza when nobody believes his premonitions
25. Setasidedthepride, My sacrifice by Creed = I love this song and clip, it’s
basically about Vegeta putting aside his pride and thinking about his family,
has him talking in parts, made by Danny, I love his work
26. Trunkslife, Bon Jovi’s it’s my life = It’s about Trunks dealing with
Gohan’s death in the future, lots of flashbacks
27. Untouchable, don’t know the name of song, or who sings it = About Vegeta
thinking he’s untouchable, lyrics suit the clips, I’ll write them out to ^_^
28. Warriorsway, Limp Bizkit, My way = About Vegeta fighting android 19, the big
fat white one, I’m not sure if I got that right, and how he’s gone super saiyan,
and it’s his way
29. Goneaway, I don’t know again, I’ll write the lyrics out to = It’s a clip
about movie 6, the fight on New Namek, and against a dew other bad guys, I love
the song, but the clip ain’t great
Arty: okay sing lyrics time, but if you know who sings these or what their
actual titles are please tell me. (Some lyrics may be wrong, I apologise if they
are)
Eternal (this is the Trunks one remember, hopefully you’ll see what I mean about
it making more sense about his hardships and the song being related when you
read this, I love this song)
Sometimes, I wish I was brave
I wish I was stronger
Wish I could feel no pain
Wish I was young
Wish I was shy
I wish I was honest
Wish I was you not I
‘Cos I feel so mad
I feel so angry
Feel so Callous
So lost, confused, not sane
I feel so cheap
So used unfaithful
Lets start over
Lets start over
Sometimes I wish I was smart
I wish I made cures for how people are
I wish I had power
I wish I could feel
I wish I could change the world
For you and me
‘Cos I feel so mad
I feel so angry
Feel so Callous
So lost, confused, not sane
I feel so cheap
So used unfaithful
Lets start over
Lets start over
‘Cos I feel so mad
I feel so angry
Feel so Callous
So lost, confused, not sane
I feel so cheap
So used unfaithful
Lets start over
Lets start over
‘Cos I feel so mad
I feel so angry
Feel so Callous
So lost, confused, not sane
I feel so cheap
So used unfaithful
Lets start over
Lets start over
Lets start over
(Yeah that’s the first one)
Untouchable (Vegeta one, will make more sense about his feelings when you think
about it, if you can tell me who sings this, do tell)
This is nothing new to me
It takes more then what you’ve got
To threaten me
I’m not scared of you
There’s nothing you can do
Or take from me
Untouchable
You think you’re untouchable
You know
No one’s untouchable
You’re about to loose the game
There’s no one else to blame
You place it safe
And you’re not risking enough
You’re about to be undone
I swear I’ll be the one
To bring you down
It’s all your fault
‘cos you got caught
Untouchable
You think you’re untouchable
You know
No one’s untouchable
It must be nice
To be so sure
You never feel insecure
It must feel good to believe
You’re always right
And never wrong
If you’ve got something to say
You say it to my face
And be a man about it
If you’ve got a problem with me
Don’t go behind my back
Just like a baby
Untouchable
You think you’re untouchable
You know
No one’s untouchable
Untouchable
You think you’re untouchable
You know
No one’s untouchable
Untouchable
You think you’re untouchable
You know
No one’s untouchable
No one’s untouchable
No one’s untouchable
No one’s untouchable
(End the 2nd one)
Goneaway (I just like this song, and it’s the last one I wrote in)
Do you pray in the night?
Can you appreciate the winds?
And I won’t cave
I won’t fight
I need to you close to sing
It’s the same begin
Gone away
It’s the same old same old song
Gone away
And it’s my whole life in words
And I can’t breath when you cry
But I’ll be there to hold you tight
And I won’t cave
I won’t fight
To keep you close I’ll keep singing the same way
I won’t live if you died
If I can feel you in the winds
And this is real
It’s my life
I’ll need you close to sing
It’s the same begin
Gone away
It’s the same old same old song
Gone away
And it’s my whole life in words
And it’s my whole life
And I can’t sing
And I don’t know
Why I fall
Why I’m gone
And I can’t sing
And I don’t know
Why I fall
Why I’m gone
Gone away
It’s the same old same old song
Gone away
And it’s my whole life in words
Gone away
It’s the same old same old song
Gone away
And it’s my whole life in words
(End number 3, well that filled in some space, not much though, compared to the
rest of my review)
Arty: That was oddly boring
Twitch: You thought so?
Arty: Yeah
Twitch: Aw
Arty: Yeah I know, but it filled in part of my night, so I’m not complaining to
much
Taigore: You know no one is actually going to read this
Arty: I’m counting on it actually, but the conversation is just here in case
anyone is actually bored enough to
Twitch: Yeah, boredom makes people do things that they wouldn’t normally do
Arty: why do you think I’m writing such a long and pointless review?
Twitch: Yeah good point, I mean I resort to Taigore’s level and experiment with
chewing on things when I’m bored
Taigore: Just pointing out, aren’t reviews supposed to talk about the story?
Arty: Yeah but we’re one of the exceptions
Twitch: oh
Taigore: What was J’dee’s reaction when you told her that Tanti would feel your
wrath?
Arty: She said something along the lines of and so will the rest of us, what do
you think she meant by this?
Taigore: That everyone else will suffer when you put this review up
Arty: Why would they suffer?
Twitch: Think about it, you review will make the scroll bar tiny as, and then
Tanti might try and retaliate, imagine what that will do to the page.
Arty: oh well, have fun now, pay consequences later
Twitch: that will come back to haunt you later
Arty: I’ll cross that bridge when I come to it
Twitch: Bridges are evil
Taigore: what makes you say that?
Twitch: The way they act, the way they stand, the way they give off that creepy
vibe that they’re going to collapse with you on them
Arty: Why do you even cross them? You can fly, can’t you?
Twitch: That’s beside the point
Taigore: You know what else is evil?
Arty: Yes, MSN
Taigore: Other then that
Arty: what
Taigore: You **falls over in fits of laughter**
Arty: Why do you say that
Taigore: ‘Cos you’re writing this incredibly long review
Arty: **growls**
Taigore: Can we stop here?
Arty: Soon
Twitch: Yay
Arty: I guess I should finish this soon, I mean I was only aiming for 40 pages,
and I did 41, let’s see Tanti beat that, with a normal review, and I used her
single spacing, but remind me to hurt Taigore later
Taigore: That would be a good idea, then I could go to bed, but don’t hurt me I
didn’t mean to say that
Arty: Liar
Twitch: what is it with you cats and sleeping?
Taigore: It’s in our blood
Twitch: Well it can’t be helped then
Taigore: **yawns** make this fast
Arty: OKAY, I want to that everyone who had the patience to read this…
And Tanti I AM THE QUEEN OF LONG REVIEWS AND THAT’S FINAL
I would like to thank Taigore and Twitch for keeping me company.
Taigore: That’s ok
Twitch: Yeah we weren’t goin’ to let you have a conversation with yourself
Arty: You can go to bed now
Taigore: Yay **falls onto a convenient pillow and falls asleep**
Twitch: Jeez what am I going to do now?
Arty: I dunno, go find some warm water and make him wet his bed or something
Twitch: **evil grin** Kool, good idea **rushes off to find water**
Arty: Aw I feel so touched
J’dee keep writing
And I’ll keep being my usual constant, annoying, and faithful reading, self
Ciao for now
I’ll catch you later
Lots of hugs J’dee and everyone who needs a hug or wants one, except Tanti ‘cos
she’s evil, unless she starts liking me ‘cos then I’ll like her, ‘cos my
feelings will be mutual.
Oh yeah and I’ll try not to write too many long reviews like this one, okay?
C’ya
Arty | Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess TRF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 07:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I just went through the other reviews and came to these conclusions:
1. I, TRF, shall murder Tatewaki Kuno. NO ONE insults my Skittles and my Hee-bear and gets away with it!
2. Other people are asking for more plushies...hmmm...Heero plushie needs friends...like Vegeta, Juunanagou, Hiei, Inuyasha, Duo, Chibodee, George and James(from Pokemon :p Don't look at me like that)
3. Grrr....Bana said Heero sucks....RAGH!!! *Tears up a nearby couch* HOW DARE SHE?! AND I THOUGHT WE WERE FRIENDS TOO!!
George: Come on now Madmoiselle. It is time for your meeting with the physchiatrist...
Chibodee: Which is nothing but Frenchie's fancy way of saying to you "Hey woman, you ain't right in the head so we're taking you to a shrink".
Heero: It's useless. I've taken her to 17 shrinks and 12 mental asylums...she drives the people there insane...
George: That may be a problem. | Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess TRF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey J'dee! Yay! Heero plushie lives!! BWHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Heero: -_-
So....we get whatever we had in the reviews in the fic huh? *Takes out water-TO DEFEAT THE EVIL ROCKS! And the one thing that shall defeat bunnies in the end...carrot pie! It'll distract them long enough for Heero plushie to shoot them and let us rescue Skittles! Also takes out a CD player and flamethrower for the convienience of it all* MWHAHAHAHAHA!!! NOW I SHALL BE INVINCIBLE! *A crack of lightening is shown in the backround....it singes TRF* Ow ;_;
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