Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this fic, I read it on fanfiction.net
but where's the update dammit??? X(
You should make it R, since you have that lil citrus scence ......
and you should try out writing lemons.....
just rate it R.....
if only fanfiction.net wasn't a bitch and band NC-17 fics!! *sniff* |
