|"Genetic Lessons" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]|
| Reviewed By: ctt On: December 13, 2002 08:29 CST|
It's very interesting. Original in its own right. Keep it up, although I think you have to fix it a bit. It seems a little choppy, especially when you began running down on the events that were shown in the anime in a 1st person view. Aside from this, I'm really looking forward to an update.
| Reviewed By: asuka On: September 21, 2002 09:15 CDT|
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
beatiful piece of prose. i keep reading again and again. doesn't seem to be very popular, but i'm confident that it'll rise up in fame.potiential here... haha... i sound like an old prof... first speaker...
| Reviewed By: Rei Inverse On: September 17, 2001 19:53 CDT|
please fix the TXT format. it is a little to wide and I have to move the windo to read the longer lines. decrease the TExt with.
| Reviewed By: Lilly On: September 21, 2001 21:56 CDT|
very well made fanfic