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| "I Hate Him" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 16:09 CST
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Wow. You got a lot of stuff thrown into this part. You get more insight into Aya-chan ... I'm glad she knows Sebastian isn't perfect ... but her willingness to be his doormat (anything he wants to do is fine) ... makes her no better than the criticism she feels about Aya and Yoji's relationship. Irony, anyone?
Ken and Aya's discussion on love was cute. Ken's reactions were pretty funny, even if he wasn't mangling his breakfast.
I liked the scene with Aya-chan and Aya in the dead of night, with Aya showing her the damage done to him. It was a good bonding moment.
I wished poor Aya wouldn't have encounter old johns and pimps. The guy needs a break. He also needs to learn to fight for himself and not only to protect others (in this case Yoji).
Thanks for putting this part out. I was just thinking the other day we should be do to a new chapter. | Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 06:26 CST
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You want a review? You really want? First, why didn't you mail me that you have updated. I told you that I'm very interested in this story. And you promised to mail me. And you didn't. Pout.
Second, yes Sebastian is a bastard and he is defianetly gay or bi or just stupid. Not to forget that he is a weakling.
And Aya? I worried that it could have been true that she spend the money for herself, but it seems that her "boyfriend" made her do it. Kick his ass, Aya-baby.
The overprotective Youji is great. If you need another fist to protect Ran, well, I'm no killer but I know how to fight.
And don't forget to tell me when the next chapter is up.
Or I won't tell you when I update. | Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do I find the words that express how this fic affects me every time there is a new chapter posted? The intensity, the attention to detail, the realism...Kami, the realism...
The vunerability of Aya, the protectiveness of Youji, Youji even in his protectiveness getting irritated with Aya...the kawaiiness and irritation of Ken and Omi...*grins* Wonderful, just wonderful.
And long chapters. I LOVE long chapters.
Thank you so much, I truly enjoy every moment I spend reading this fic. And I hope it never, ever ends.
Talon | Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 22:57 CST
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Whee!! Updates!! I love this fic so much! And yes, Sebastian was an ass to the third degree. Very hateable, if that's what you were going for. I hope you write more soon! | Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 22:35 CST
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I'm glad Aya-chan wasn't a complete bitch and that she recognized that Sebastian was a bit of a prick. I'm glad Ken decked the guy but I'd be happier if Yoji got to clock him as well. It had me wondering if Sebastian wasn't a former client of Ran's the way he kept pawing the guy. | Reviewed By: RueRoyale On: March 22, 2003 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed this fic incredibly and could not wait for the next installment. this is absolutely wonderful. i think you really did something wonderful with the getting Aya to go as he would have done except this time with Yohji. it'd be a dream if anyone did that for a rape victim. it is really effective, and the trust Aya has to put in Yohji is amazing, even to those who haven't been raped. because one thing could ruin it all, and you have really captured that delicacy well throughout your fic.
i liked this recent chapter (17) a lot because of the characterization. that kind of stuff you really can't find unless it's your kind of continuation fic.
yohji is lovable, truly lovable, and Sebastion is one bastard! you really have me feeling for the characters here.
this is really a great and realistic read. keep writing! | Reviewed By: la blue kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 22:18 CST
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I'm waiting (not very patiently) for you to finish this! The writing is so good in it. I've told you this before but the way you use characterization is amazing! Now get to writing! | Reviewed By: Anria Lalumin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 06:55 CST
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Thank GOD you updated this . . . I've been going crazy trying to find good, interesting WK fics. No one seems to be writing any more . . . but you made my day, girl! That was excellent - glad to see Aya-chan's not a completely spoiled bitch. And in defence of English people everywhere, I would like to say some of us know other languages. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Kaoru-chan On: November 29, 2002 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Anime gher!
I love your story!!! It's really good, I like the characters of Youji and Aya, I like Omi too. but Ken... I didn't like Ken so much, but this has nothing to do with your fic! Promise!
The idee is really original and your style is damn good!
I have had fear, that somithing will happen to Aya again, but I'm so glad that he is save now.
Please, continue the story, I would like to know what will happen now. It is really exciting because I haven't a clue for the end of the fic. Please, please, PLEASE post the next part to Mediaminer or Fanfiction.net.
Bye the way, why is your story still of fanfiction.net? It really NC-17, so why it is still there? Because of the R-Rating?
Okay, I think I've said already enough.
Ciao,
Kaoru-chan | Reviewed By: LittleMay [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm looking foraward to your next chapter!!!
I'm from Germany and it's very difficult to find a great fanfiction in German. So i'm looking for english ones. Ans as I read your Fiction I was so happy because it's really great. (i don't know how to experess my opinion in English...*sorry*)
May | Reviewed By: kyo suki On: November 13, 2002 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.
just...
wow
i can't believe how cool this is. it's sheer amazing! waah, i'm so happy that i have found this. actually, i've spent most of the past days reading this, couldn't bring myself to stop.
wai, it's quit long and i sooo love it!
can't remember having ever read such a good story at all.
have i already told you that i love it? *grins*
hey, i'm becoming addicted to this, mind you. you wouldn't stop at this point, ne? please go on writing it! please, please, pretty please?
tell me what i have to do to make you go on with this and i promise i will do it! would dropping to my knees and begging you for writing it further do any good? *blinks*
maa, guess i just have to print the whole chapters out and take them to bed with me now.
yes, very good idea.
so, please continue on writing this, or else...
i just have to beg more.
that's it.
oh, and please forgive my bad english...
it's not my native language.
i'm german...
and sooo in love with this story!
go on! it's wonderful!
kyo suki | Reviewed By: Enna Namo On: November 06, 2002 05:37 CST
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Sorry, I know, usually I'll review right away, but this time, args, my job is killing me at the moment. Nevertheless, I've read the new chapter and here is my review.
I loved it. The lemon was more than just good. All about caring and being gently and Aya realising that he has defianetly the right to say NO. That was sooo lovingly.
And Aya-chan spend the money for herself? To much money corupts, thats what I always say. As long has you have to work for it, you value it too much to spend it on crap like jewlery or designer clothes.
Can't wait for the next chapter. | Reviewed By: Luna On: November 05, 2002 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! You're fic is soo good! Who cares about what sort of motorcycle Ken-kun has!:P Write more, k? | Reviewed By: MGscifi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 01:02 CST
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Just a note... Ken owns a Kawasaki, not a Ducati. The author of the Weiss Manga stated this, as well as there being evidence in the Anime series. Thought you'd like to know. The only time Ducati is ever used as a motorcycle brand is for Rei Kashino's inherited bike in MARS. Other than that, Keep up the good work :) | Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 14:45 CST
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You did a wonderful job considering the pressure you had to write it under (i.e. your roommate and friends standing around while you type). I only see one part you will have to go back to edit. Did they go all the way or not? It sounded like once Aya gave Yoji that condom that they did, yet the morning after you have Aya speculating that they didn't go "all the way". | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
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