Reviewed By: WacheyP87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You only had a few grammar mistakes, but that doesn't matter. I really loved this story! Though the names Mandy and Ashley remind me of me, cause' they are apart of my name. Won't say what order, or why I'm practically telling you my name. Well, update soon! |
