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"A New Sailor Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Sailor Wind  On: June 10, 2003 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, I really love your story but if that member was serious, I think you just need a liitle help with spelling "slang" terms and grammer. Otherwise, from what I could read, that was totally awesome. Keep it up who knows, maybe with summer coming, you and the many authers who hasn't finished their stories, will finish. And who knows I might get to see the ending.KEEP WRITING.
 Reviewed By: Shino Ryu [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2003 14:55 CST
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please don't use slang in your fics, in the author notes it's ok but it's a real turn off to see it in the fic itself.

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