Reviewed By: Sailor Wind On: June 10, 2003 20:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Okay, I really love your story but if that member was serious, I think you just need a liitle help with spelling "slang" terms and grammer. Otherwise, from what I could read, that was totally awesome. Keep it up who knows, maybe with summer coming, you and the many authers who hasn't finished their stories, will finish. And who knows I might get to see the ending.KEEP WRITING. |