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 Title: Writing of a professional calibre
Reviewed By: crispy  On: February 23, 2009 23:00 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have read this fanfiction three times; the first time was 4 years ago, another time last year, and the latest being this last week. Each time after the first, I remembered reading this great fanfiction a long time ago and decided to read it over again. I have not read many novels by professional writers that have been as engaging or compelling as this fanfiction. Mr. E., there are still people out here reading and enjoying your fanfiction waiting desperately for an update. There's a near universal consensus among the reviews that this is one of the best fanfictions out there, and I know your fans would very much appreciate it if there were more to come.
 Title: Waiting and praying
Reviewed By: Major Zelda Fan  On: January 09, 2009 20:48 PST
Comment/Review:
I plan to go the extra step and print, hole punch, and bind this story into a zip up binder. It is a priceless, though incomplete work. I have lost count of how many times I have read it, truely. And everytime I smile, laugh, and a msurprised at the same scenes, and in awe of your work. I agree with most of the reviews, especially the anonymous cowards. I dont mind what you do, I just pray you take your time and finish this work, and maybe go on and make your own, I know you have the skills just reading this piece. I cant leave a project or task undone, but I am a professional procrastinator as well. So I can spend weeks and months leaveing stuff undone, I know things happen, but I eagerly await if you descide to work on Lucky Number Thirteen once more.
 Title: Do want.
Reviewed By: Maverickz  On: November 17, 2008 19:45 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, I don't like to harass, but two months without anyone commenting at all must be a bit discouraging. We're still alive out here, and very much looking forward to an update, Cap'n. The last one was wonderful, and thank you again. But yeah. You and this story have not been forgotten. I been checking back biweekly or more, and I have other people I know are doing the same(or just asking me.. lazy asses) Like I said, I just wanted to make sure you knew that we still are here and interested... And drooling from time to time. Take your time, I know it's a work of art, but don't let it go. I know at least I'm dying for the next chapter, and someday an ending. I hope a couple other people put the same feelings up here as well.. god knows you deserve the attention and encouragement. Take care of yourself, man, and I do hope the rest of life is going well for you.
 Reviewed By: An Anonymous Coward  On: August 29, 2008 12:05 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm one of those types of people who doesn't like fanfics. Most of the time, they're shoddily written by shoddy authors who (literally and visually) can't distinguish a piece of crap from a real book. Often, their trite "works" are so predictable that it actually hurts to read them. However, recently, I was looking for a laugh, so I decided to find some fanfiction so badly written that it would leave me with either the proverbial giggles for days or a wish to never read a single piece of fanfiction ever again. At first, your story seemed to fit the bill. However, after the first few chapters, I realized that I was wrong. For some reason, to my disdain, this story was actually somewhat interesting. Initially, I chalked it up to having known the characters previously. If I had just walked into some random InuYasha fanfic, I wouldn't have known one character's face from another character's ass. But the Legend of Zelda series remains one of my favorites, and as I knew the characters, the story was somewhat easy to settle into. Imagine my surprise when I realized I was enjoying myself. It's all due to some simple things: those plot twists that do nothing but make your mind into a ball of goo due to the effort spent trying to understand them. Your constant plot twists and turns elicited many a "what the fuck" from my mouth over the past few days. Looking back at the initial plot twists, they're nothing compared to the later, more recent ones. Even trying to make a map of them in my head just leaves this mind-numbingly weird feeling that I don't think I'll be able to shake for a while. The story's good, alright, but there were many, many times when I just felt plain confused, due to one of many problems common to fanfiction in general. I noticed quite a few times when words were seemingly just left out, leaving me to fill in the blanks to make the sentence make sense. (Of course, you should be happy in knowing that this (as well as the other typical problems) happened much less than some other fanfiction I've read in the past. Trust me when I say that most is garbage.) As predictable as certain parts of it were, the vast majority were brazenly unpredictable, veering off into directions that are simply unfathomable to most minds. It's rare that there's someone with both a good, creative mind and the literary skills to bring their ideas from their mind to a sheet of paper. As I've read, I've been constantly impressed with the style of storytelling that you've presented, as well as the content of the actual story within. That's a rare thing to find. As convoluted as this story would seem to be to someone who knew just the basic plot points, you elegantly manage to pull it off without making it feel too out of place from the original intent of the Legend of Zelda series. Of course, it IS so out of place from the original story that the fact that this story feels like it actually works is testament alone to your skill as an author. Very few people could pull something even remotely like this off. You somehow managed to pick up the broken jigsaw puzzle of the Legend of Zelda timeline and put the pieces back together incorrectly, and, somehow, the resulting picture wasn't foreign at all. It came out looking exactly as one expected it to be, only with the individual pieces of the puzzle broken and molded into a form of your choosing - but the important part is that they fit, no matter how wrong that seems. Take out the sexual content and what you have here is one of the most interesting, brilliant, and, most importantly, fucked up stories that I've ever read. I can only hope that that's what you were aiming for. My advice to you? Take your time and finish this up, and then get off of your fanfiction haunches and craft an original story, with characters and a world of your own creation. I'm fairly sure that with a little effort on your part (and professional proofreading on another's) that you could have a best-seller on your hands.
 Title: It a work of art...
Reviewed By: Gunn~  On: May 06, 2008 23:10 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm not as good with words as I'd hope to be, so much I'd like to say about this story, but to put it simply... Exceptional, period. Great story, loving every facet of it, the expanding / evolving plot and twists, characters... greatness indeed. This last chapter was somewhat shorter than the earlier chapters but still captured my attention with every word. Best fic I've ever read, hope the story doesn't have to end any time soon cause I've enjoyed every bit of it. You are a great writer and hope there's much more to come. Nice that it's here for free but I'd still be reading even if it wasn't.
 Title: Glad to see a new update
Reviewed By: TheClone  On: April 21, 2008 01:03 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoy your work. It was good to see that you are still continuing the story.
 Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 14, 2008 07:52 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's nice to see a new chapter. I look forward to the next one. V --)-----
 Title: PIE!!! XD
Reviewed By: Major Zelda Fan  On: April 05, 2008 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*tries to go higher than ten out of ten* "Pie! Bring me pie!" And the demands of a former god ... for pie. I LOVED THAT LINE!!! IT SOUNDS JUST LIKE HIM TO DO THAT!!!... *wondering if he will have another battle with the stomach monsters* TRUELY A PRICELESS CHARACTER!!! *still laughing* YOU ARE ONE OF THE BEST WRITER'S I HAVE EVER READ THE WORK OF!!!
 Title: Wewt.
Reviewed By: Maverickz  On: March 26, 2008 20:05 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! Chapter added! Me and another friend who read were hoping you hadn't died. And trying to figure out which one of us had to chase you into the next life for the ending. Heh. Anyways, thank you very much for the addition, and even though it hasn't been long, as always we look forward to another chapter to this wonderful work. Many thanks! - Eric
 Reviewed By: Anecdote  On: March 10, 2008 23:20 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love you. So dearly, dearly, love you. This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read, EVER! I figure this review isn't really helpful to you, but let it be known that this story sparked many, many numerous inspirations for writings and ideas on my side. I love this story so much, beyond words, I can't even express myself correctly. Know this: you're amazing. Thank you. Thank you.
 Reviewed By: sbf  On: March 06, 2008 18:36 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another excellent addition. The pie bit was a little out there, but the new developements in the God War along with the invasion of New Hyrule made for a most enjoyable chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter and I thank you for continueing your great work.
 Reviewed By: ashura_001  On: March 05, 2008 00:11 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*dances* UPDATE! Soooo glad you updated. I liked the progression of the main points. The insight into the kids was an interesting extra, as well as Jr. still being able to potentially be useful sans magic. The pie bit, while hilarious, was almost too eccentric, even for Link Sr. The melting into an outline portion was interesting, but felt somewhat rushed. In fact, the whole chapter felt a little rushed, especially in comparison to the previous chapters. Many interesting points, but nothing really got any spotlight. They were all sort of mentioned in passing. Hopefully the next chapter will go into more details. As an aside, it is so good to have an update. I still check every other day lol. Looking forward to the next chapter!
 Title: Publish this or die.....just kidding
Reviewed By: Stepmaster_Spoony [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2008 23:12 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic...no...this novel is so enjoyable and convincing that I have no choice but to except it as cannon to The Legend of Zelda franchise. If you are a smart guy,(and I can tell your smarter than the average bear) then you would try and get this published officially, as I have seen other fanfics of lesser quality do and become huge successes to the general populace. And if you do try to get this published, than you should(and probably can) get Nintendo's seal of approval for it, if not that, than at least from the guy that owns the rights to The Legend of Zelda. Well anyway, please post another chapter soon and keep up awe-inspiring work.
 Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: davos the angelslayer [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 31, 2008 14:49 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was sweet and an exellent way to spen a week and a half for me i hope theres more to your story.
 Title: PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: Major Zelda Fan  On: October 04, 2007 22:00 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I sincerily hope that you have another portion of this story up soon, for it is to good of one to leave as is. I also feverently hope any writers block you have is shatered by divine inspiration! Looking foreward to more of your marvelous work.
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