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 Title: open mouth insert foot
Reviewed By: JIblet  On: January 19, 2007 22:04 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I...You...How...seriously, if I were a woman, and a rampant fangirl, I would be one of those holding a poster saying 'Mr.E, be my babies father' Luckily for the both of us that isn't the case. Great chapter, excellent story, fantastic twists, loops and down right plot spirals. If all fanfic writers wrote like you, authors of best selling books would be scarce and 'new york times most read fanfic!' would be a new label to be put on fanfic titles. You are simply an incredible author, and I can honestly say without a hint of a lie that your story and portrayal has actually TAUGHT me something. literally TAUGHT, school teachers are prone to crying tears of futility in that effort, so I applaud you good sir. All I can say is I hope that you are still living and working and for the sake of all of us who read your work (some of us on the verge religious fanatics) that a new chapter is forthcoming soon, keep up the fantastic work, you are well and truly the best author, fanfiction or otherwise, I have had the pleasure of reading of there stories.
 Title: The great....
Reviewed By: funkmasterjo [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2007 19:47 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just had the indescribable urge to review again. Really, every now and again, I'll get this need to find this story again. I have you on alert, so I shouldn't need to. But it's just good to see it, you know? Like some kind of holy relic (sorry, that was bad I know). Though I've improved my writing as a fanfic author, I look at this story and am humbled. Every time. You know, I read so much fanfiction, but this one will always hold a special place in my heart (that one was bad, too. However, it's true...) Cheers to Lucky Number 13, the Great...
 Reviewed By: redemption  On: December 28, 2006 15:55 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
In my opinion, your story has covered an entire spectrum of emotions; joy, sadness, betrayal, humor, etc. I hope Vic makes the correct decision, and I second Mr. Chaos in saying that the family should crawl back to Link.
 Title: Coolest story about zelda i have ever read
Reviewed By: Major Zelda Fan  On: December 14, 2006 10:55 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is so great I think you should get nintendo's permission to publish it. I read a lot of various books and your skills are par if not better than many of my favorite authors. Great job so far... and I hope to see more soon. Good luck on the stroy, you are doing an awesome job so far :).
 Reviewed By: Mr, Chaos  On: December 13, 2006 10:03 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
First off, let me say that I have realyl enjoyed the turn of events. I almost thought that you jumped the shark with the battle with Fate, mainly because it just seemed to drag on and on. But now, this new twist is a great one, and brings us back to the Link we first met: The scorned hero betrayed by all those he love (I really hope you plan to have someone say that to Nab, tell her, "You might as well have said you were marrying someone else and then invite him to the wedding"------ The only problem I see right now is that, at this moment, I personally can never concieve supporting anyone other then Link again in this story. Nab, Sep, Link Jr., Both Zeldas, even his parents...they have betrayed him (And us, the readers) so deeply. Worse, because we see fully Link's side, I do not see how you will ever get the readers to stand behind Nab and the family again. Link sacrificed 3000 years, and at the first turn, they betray him. Worst of all, Nab. I thought it was corny when Link allowed her back in his life the first time. But now? F--- her. Nab is dead to me. She shows no remorse, no regret for the way she has torn apart his heart and disgraced is actions. Once again, all she cares about is power. Just like when she cheated on him, she does it so she can have power. She doesn't love Link, I see that now. She loves what he is: The Hero of Time that she can control. She even said it herself earlier! And she still didn't change.--- Here is what I hope we see the next time you update: First, hardly any Link. I don't think you've ever done a chapter with no Link, so itwould be interesting to do one like that. Then, have every charecter at first believingthat once again, LInk will justgiveup and return and be their lap dog. But, as time goes by, they each begin to remember things about the past, promises and commitments dealing with Link: 1) Esmerelda remembering that she had once promised Link a home cooked dinner before everything went to hell, and now, with him being back and availible, she never once invited her own first born into her home for a meal. 2) Sep remembering all the encoragement that Link gave her, even though he had all the right to mistrust her for being Gannondolf's daughter, only for her to turn around and not trust him in the slightest. 3) Link Jr. remembering the stories of his father that he had always heard, and realizing that had it been his father in the position Link Jr. was in, Link would have stood up for whoever it was; with that thought, LInk Jr. realizes that despite everything he has done, he has failed at his one goal: To grow up to be just like his dad. 4) Saria (who we can assume was part of the betrayal council, as I call it) remembering when LInk was just a little boy that everyone left out and ignored, and realizing she has done the same thing to him now: that she is no better then all the boys and girls that use to make fun of little Link for not having a fairy. 5) Zelda (link's daughter) remembering the time when she was a child and her father left to train, all the wishing she did that he would return, and now, once more when he came back, she has turned on him. 6) Queen Zelda remembering every slight, every mistake she made with Aruthor, and realizing that she has allowed it all to happen again. 7) And finally, Nab...Nab remembering Link's famous line when he broke up with her in the bedroom: "My kingdom is saved, my people are rich...your services are no longer needed". And at that moment, she realizes that she has finally, totally destroyed the last ounce of trust link had in her. That she used his name and gifts for her own selfish needs, and now, now when she finally sees what little comfort power and wealth hold...she has no one to hold her and see her and love her.---And when that is done, I do not want to see Link come to them. No, good author, I beg you...make the fmaily crawl to him and work for his forginess. As Zelda once said,make Nab work for it
 Title: Good Job
Reviewed By: Buff Kitty  On: September 18, 2006 19:53 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You win at the internet.
 Reviewed By: OmniMagi  On: September 18, 2006 11:36 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another rockin' chapter, man. Keep up the good work, hoping to see more soon!
 Title: HMR
Reviewed By: HMR  On: September 16, 2006 01:23 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Why bother with the rating system when you know your going to get a ten.Awesome,no, Superb chapter!More! I havent read such a chapter in a long time, aside from the ones on this fic, that leaves such anticipation for your next piece. I cannot wait for the next chapter!Keep writing and update soon! < :D Im proud to say that Ive been a fan of this fic since its days at ff.net. > And glad to have found it here at mediaminer.
 Reviewed By: skulldevil  On: September 09, 2006 18:20 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
if you want to know why i`m reviewing this, my reasoning, is while god link has been used before, it was`nt to this level. i seriously beleive that this is the absolute best fic ever made about someone being a god. i hope this story continues because i found it when it had 1 chapter and decided to wait for it to grow. i come back to it and find 59 chapters in the story. needless to say, you`ve outdone yourself. i almost cried when i read some parts. others display your amazing(sick)sense of humor, like the "ass monsters" as you put it. oh, and as to why i never reveiwed before, since it probably seems strange that i showed up out of the blue, is that i only reveiw the latest chapters of storys. i`ve probably taken up some of your time rambling, so i`ll just end this here. Signed, S.D.
 Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 26, 2006 05:36 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I enjoy this story to the point that I reread it all the time, but this later chapter seems a little short and a little rush. Not to say it's bad, it's quite good, just it seemed like more explanation is needed. Then again you might just being grabbing our attention so that the next chapter explains everything and we're back. *shrug* not all of us can tell the future. ^_^ good luck with the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: Kilvas  On: July 25, 2006 23:56 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Amazing, simply amazing. Though I feel that this chapter was a bit too short, It was a new chapter! I had almost thought that you had given up on writing. You pleased me greatly by proving me wrong. You are the best author I have encountered. You gave life and personality to a completely two-dimensional character in a world that could be described as idealist at best. Your talent astounds me. Please keep writing. When reading your work, I can finally put down my troubles and immerse myself into Link's world. Fot that amount of time, nothing else matters.
 Reviewed By: PreacherOfPhi  On: July 25, 2006 15:30 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh how I love you ;) Cant wait for the next chapter. Cant believe its still as interesting as all the others!
 Reviewed By: froop [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2006 21:03 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You must be some kind of mind reader or something good sir. Only yesterday I was thinking it had been awhile since I had seen a chapter then BAM, chapter it is. I do like how you handled this chapter. It really fits in with how you've handled Link's one hell of a fucked up life. He endured thousands of years of torture to protect his family and when he finally returns they are kind of 'eh' to him. It really fits in with the mood of the rest of the story. A.k.a. Link gets fucked over. Repeatedly. I can't wait to see where you take it from here. Cheers for another good chapter Sir.
 Title: Short, and need moer
Reviewed By: Zhuyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2006 20:32 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
A short chapter. I need more. :) Reality's a bitch, huh?
 Reviewed By: Maverickz  On: July 18, 2006 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I contacted you once a while back.. This is by far the best story I have ever read. I reread it every so often while i wait for the update. I have never been able to feel what a character was meant to feel just by reading a story before, and whether sad, empty, hurt, or joyful, it has always been one hell of a ride. As people have said previous, please dont leave this story unfinished. I just needed to post up here how amazing an experience it's been, and tell ya to keep up the good work. Thank you. 
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