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| "The Legend of Link: Lucky Number 13" Reviews/Comments [ 330 ] | | Pages (22): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] | Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 17:39 PST
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Hello, again. How about posting more than one chapter a month? I know you have a bunch to be posted becasue i saw them on FF.net but if you're doing revisions that's fine but I like reading them so having more than one a month would be better. just my opinion.
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Hey! Are you done with this story or is there more?! If there's more, I would really like to see on what happens next! This story is excellent! Keep it up! | Reviewed By: Randalfin On: January 28, 2003 21:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work Mr. E. It's the same as I remember it. Too bad these other newbies don't know whats coming up next. While some might argue that the concepts a little cliche, the overall plot of it completley makes up for it. Keep it up. | Reviewed By: DJ On: January 25, 2003 11:56 PST
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Veyr sad (emotional) ending. Great story, nevertheless! Keep it up! | Reviewed By: xtreemmasheen3k2 On: January 21, 2003 21:34 PST
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actually, no i didn't know. O well, i guess i do now. | Reviewed By: Jon Cook On: January 20, 2003 07:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is just wonderful. I don't care what anyone else thinks, this is the best Zelda story on the internet. Keep them chapters coming. | Reviewed By: Safus On: January 17, 2003 20:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Better than ever! Oh, and I'm going to leave a note to all who leave suggestions on where to go with your story. You DO know that Mr. E has already written 36 chapters and is just editing them, right? | Reviewed By: xtreemmasheen3k2 On: January 17, 2003 15:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great writing on your part. I really enjoyed reading all the chapters. However, i was kinda pissed in the beginning, as because i know Zelda would never do that, but hey, it's your fanfic and your imagination. Well, before i read the part of Ganondorf coming back, i expected the Fierce Deity mask to be the new king of darkness, as because Fierce Deity Link is known as Oni-Link in Japanese, and Oni means demon. But, i was wrong. Maybe you could link this fanfic to the new Wind Walker game coming out, and try to explain the apearance of the new Link 100 years after Ocarina of Time. WEll, if anything, a girl would have to come out of the timeline, which would be Link's Grandmother, and 2 generations later, out come Link and his sister Aria. Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this. can't wait for the next chapter. | Reviewed By: DJ On: January 14, 2003 13:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The latest chapter you have put here is good! It looks like Link has a difficult dilemma here. If you need some suggestions, I have one right here. I hope you approve. Here it is!
Link and Nabooru are considering what their options are, after their encounter with Ghost Gannondorf. They both come with one option: Go to Zelda and ask for the Triforce of Wisdom. Link is reluctant of this option, and Nabooru knows why. She tells Link that he needs to go see her and ask for the Triforce. He agrees to go, but only if Nabooru goes with him. She says that she will go. After that, they both pack and head over to Hyrule Castle. When they arrive, they go towards the castle. But, Link and Nabooru are not permitted in. This greatly displeases both of them, but Link shows Nabooru another way to get in. Link uses the same tatics he used as a kid to sneak both him and Nabooru in. They elude the guards, and soon find themselves in the Palace Garden. They also find Queen Zelda, with Aruther by her side. The two look at Link and Nabooru, and the atmosphere is so thick that it is unbeliveable! Zelda ses Link, and she is amazed on what he has become. Lately, she is fed up with Aruther and wants Link back. Link, however, is over with Zelda and is loyal to Nabooru. Nabooru loathes Zelda for what she did to Link, and is more then ready to defend her man.
Well, that is all I have for now. I hope that the author for this story sees this review. Anyway, this story is getting really interesting and really would like to see on what happens next! Keep it up! | Reviewed By: Fire and Brimstone On: January 07, 2003 20:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. I loved it on ff.net but it somehow has gotten even more magically delicious. Keep up the good work. Peace | Reviewed By: DJ On: January 03, 2003 08:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope this isn't the ending. I really would have loved to see a catfight between Zelda, Malon, Ruto, and Nabooru over Link! But, this will have to do. This was really a cool story! Keep it up! | Reviewed By: Shardshatter On: December 27, 2002 21:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man... I've been reading this and Clone Chronicles
for nearly a year. Since fanfiction.net became
PC I geuss that some of the newer people to see it
are in for a rude awakening. I won't spoil it, but
perception is a creul thing. And Link's perception
could use and overhaul. | Reviewed By: DJ On: December 24, 2002 07:43 PST
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This fanfic is now getting good! I really like the way you portray Zelda as an evil girl, and Nabooru as Link's new girlfriend. I really hope they stay together. Oh, I have a suggestion here:
Link and Nabooru go and destroy Mistress Rova and start to have a good life together. Unfortunatly, there is trouble brewing. Zelda, Malon, and Ruto are beginning to see that their marraige to their husbands was a mistake at the beginning. They start to miss Link, now seeing on what they let go. The three then find out on where he is, and try to bring him back. They find him practicing at the Trainning Grounds, and they see on how much he has changed. The problem is that Link is loyal to Nabooru, and she is more then determined to fight these three ladies to keep Link.
Well, that's the suggestion. If you would like to use this as an idea for the next chapter, cool! If not, I understand. Well, gotta go. Keep it up! | Reviewed By: DJ On: December 23, 2002 10:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story! This is getting good! Keep it up! | Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 05:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a slight bit too slappy, but otherwise great | | Pages (22): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] |
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