| "Rembrance" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. I like the twist you put in about Hitomi. I would like it more if you did a little more variations on the plot so that it doesn't follow so close to the original story. My personal like though. I would like to see how you work things out between Van, Allen and Hitomi. Please continue to update!!!
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Reviewed By: ti'ana On: December 25, 2002 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep them coming! |
Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like your story! please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Gemini On: October 12, 2002 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story so far us great I have read many Fanfics but this onr is by far my favorite!!! |
Reviewed By: LOVE WITCH On: September 29, 2002 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Write another chapter soon please. It's really good. Van and Hitomi forever.
I hate Allen Shezar. Hitomi run away and find Van.
WRITE ON! |
