| "A Woman Left Lonely" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: a woman left lonely
Reviewed By: fanny On: March 27, 2005 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the way paired ryoko and Hotsuma....if tenchi had saw what was going,he would feel the same way ryoko felt,when she saw tenchi and sakuya kissing.... continue writing
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Reviewed By: nicole7 On: March 25, 2005 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. I always wondered what Ryoko would do if Tenchi rejected her and you just gave me a new twist. Thanks. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Angel of Death 138 On: July 14, 2002 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE hotsuma and ryoko fics.You give both point of views and you seem to have an image of what it looks like.I love your work, you give a deep blend of emotions that shows how Ryoko must feel after 'The Kiss'. Please write a "regular" romance fanfic about these two!
-Darkness there and nothing more.
Edgar Allen Poe |
