| "Sound Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: MORE!!!!! plz!
Reviewed By: alexus-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brillant story, werid interactive between hotaru and ranma but ok, still to be hinting at alot i.e. subcon enegry use by hotaru and some werid use by ranma. obv no conflict with powerlevels as you havent shown whats more power magic phy boosting or ki. If going to compare then magic is obv better at energy deflecting and blasts of power i.e. taking hit balls of power and throwing balls of power, while ki is better at increaseing speed, stregth, and a larger arrary of energy molding avaible. Magic seems to be more per-set things and simply amount of power in a attack and number of them and the density of the magic. but anyway good story, good char development, hope for more soon.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Story Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic... I love waff moments...
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Reviewed By: Rei Inverse On: September 05, 2001 20:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
you need to fix the format of the first chapter. |
Reviewed By: Prottoss On: September 07, 2001 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
The bad formatting of the chapter was the fault of MediaMiner actually.
I've fixed the problem in MediaMiner's code and now the chapter looks fine.
Btw. This is a great story, I hope the author decides to continue it further. |
Reviewed By: Corwin On: September 08, 2001 17:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, Kaos! Glad you decided to post here. Remember Shades! Viva la resistance! |
