| "Look at Me" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Heta Noitio On: February 07, 2005 08:19 CST
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Well, I found it! *looks happy* And the search was worth it. Sharon is just so loveable. And that she is worried about her son in the end of fifteenth chapter brings a bit of seriousness in the story. But well, it all washes out when Yohji starts to play. When Aya and Yohji met at Sharon's, I was just shocked. Like "Omg, they are together... This quick? *bouncing happily*". It was so sweet. *smile* And Aya, God his emotions! You have made him Ran. I mean, he is Aya, sure, but now, with Yohji, he truly is Ran. Like Yo-chan *giggles* asked. Waiting for update, who me?
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Reviewed By: Ramis Hunroll [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 19:13 CDT
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This story was great! However, I was wondering if it's complete. I would like to know. You can contact me at rkegley2003@yahoo.com. Please let me know. (P.S. I've read your other fics and they are amazing too! Please keep writing!)
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Reviewed By: Amy the Yu On: March 15, 2003 15:30 CST
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Dude! I love this. PLZ!!! update soon. ^_^ PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Man, this is good! (Can you tell I think this's good?)
Peace out =)
Amy the Yu |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: March 13, 2003 06:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In this moment I discovered your fic and it's....FANTASTIC...LOVELY....and it is a Yohji x Aya fic^^.....I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Full of emotions and it's *awwwww* soooo cute...I know I often say it -_-...BUT I can't help it but you all are writing soooo GREAT Y x A fics and it is what I feel^^....It's my favourite pairing ^_~!
So...go on with this fic and...SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNN!!!!!^^
Ja *GO GO GO*
Koji-chan
P.S.: Gomen for this really really bad grammar
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Reviewed By: LadyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very lovely fic. ^^ *sigh* I'm more of an Aya/Brad fan yet after reading this fic of yours I'm finding myself swinging to the Aya/Yohji fandom as well. ^^
Both characters were wonderfully written and in character, a few gramatical errors but otherwise. . .PERFECTO!
Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Yon- On: January 16, 2003 16:47 CST
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I could finally put my hand on this one again ^_____^ (been busy lately) and it still YohjixAya and you still writing great fics... I'm sooo happy!!! I'll e-mail you later! |
Reviewed By: psychosnaz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loooove how nicely this fic is unfolding, nice and slow with the puurfect amount of tension! and it's just sooo sweet!!
keep up the great work and i'll be checking every day for updates! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lavender M [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 22:56 CST
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I started reading this fic back at YnH, and for a long time, I thought I'd never get to read the rest of it, so I'm really glad I found it here. It makes me happy knowing the fic's not dead, but I understand if you've gotta deal with stuff first. So regardless of how long it takes to finish, I still anticipate the next chapter. For what it's worth, I think you write wonderfully. |
Reviewed By: Larania On: December 16, 2002 19:06 CST
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I can understand mental shit getting in the way of a story, though it sucks for the readers. I hope things get better for you. Writing is a good way to handle that kind of thing. |
Reviewed By: Switch On: December 11, 2002 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????I'm waiting.....and waiting......and waiting...... and waiting......... and waiting...... and waiting......... and waiting...... and waiting......... ok you're probably getting the point. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Switch On: December 08, 2002 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When Are you going to update the story! I'm getting all weepy eyed just waiting! Your killing me here! Please continue with your story!!! It's so good!!!! |
Reviewed By: Larania [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it.. I am so sappy at times its painful. Keep writing this! What would be freaky is if Yoji's mom and friends found out what he had been doing alll this time... |
Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yohji and Aya..so sweet... I can't wait to read more.
I was kinda waiting for the whole blow up thing..but I'm glad that it didn't happen.
Ja |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 07:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, thank goodness that things didn't blow up in either one of their faces. Yohji's reaction was such a relief. Ah, love. Such an unpredictable emotion. I really can't wait til the next chapter. Hurry soon with more! |
Reviewed By: Anna On: October 17, 2002 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it and look forward to the next chapter. Please, write soon. |
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