| "Essence of Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Enoch-lord of the dead On: June 07, 2004 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic (only reason I didn't rate 10 0ut of 10 is I'm to Yaoi loving to rate anything perfect that has no NC17 stuff). You have to do more, be it a sequel or such forth, you can't leave it like this! Its not fair! *cries* I want more Schu-Schu!
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Reviewed By: Cattu On: July 02, 2003 17:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
um, first thing I do NOT share the opinions of the frankly rude person who wrote the first review, (and if your gonna flame someone you'd better be able to do a HELL of a lot better naz...)
you've obviously put time and effort into this fic and so far I have enjoyed reading it and although you do need to develop your characterization and plot if you want your fics to stand out I think it has potential and I'm looking forward to reading the rest! ^^ |
Reviewed By: nazarith On: October 13, 2002 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Horrible characterizations. I do not like the way this was written; though it has decent spelling, this fic comes off as written by a plebeian.
I will not read any chapters after this. |
