Reviewed By: Masquerade_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy freakin' crap, you wrote that in seventh grade?!? You are a REALLY good writer! I could never write something that great when I was in seventh grade!! Would you like to see what mine would be like even now? Here it goes (and it's dedicated to you because you're so awesome!):
When the wind blows in the grass
All I can feel is your, um, butt
While you munch on a crunchy apple
I give you, uh, smelly, um, crapholes
After we've given each other a shoe
You run away and leave me feeling blue
And when you come back and are happy
I'm still sitting here feeling crappy!
See, I'm so cool! But not as cool as you! :( But still, :) So yay!
Jeez, I just still can't believe that you wrote that in seventh grade!! Short, but extremely sweet and awesome and great and wonderful and marvelous and I think you understand where I'm going with this. :) :) :) :) Smileys are my logo. |
