| "Quatre Pays A Visit" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: calmwind On: April 03, 2004 07:03 CST
Comment/Review:
love it. very well written.
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Reviewed By: angel wings kit On: December 09, 2002 13:51 CST
Comment/Review:
i loved it |
Reviewed By: glitterynile [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't agree with Fujimiya_Jai here, Kurashi you have done a wonderful job- though mm.org kick you butt with the html! >. |
Reviewed By: glitterynile [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't agree with Fujimiya_Jai here, Kurashi you have done a wonderful job- though mm.org kick you butt with the html! >. |
Reviewed By: Fujimiya_Jai On: December 01, 2002 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, lessee where to begin. First off, the format. Eep. Second...um, you may want to check on the dialogue. Like say it out loud without stopping to read the actions. It's very...abrupt. It kinda felt like "I'm sorta fond of you" "Get naked" "okay". I don't think that's what you were going for. |
