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| "Roses" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: KuraiMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 10:40 CST
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is there gonna be a next chap? cuz i cant wait to see it! >.<
anyway its great i read this before just didnt revieuwt cuz then i didnt knew i could...well arent i stupid ne? XD well anyway great work!
| Reviewed By: KawaiiKaren On: March 02, 2003 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, pretty good writing, though I wish you wrote about what happened to Shuichi! ^^;; That would be something good like spur an AU fanfiction up. Make Shuichi try to get back home, you know, have him work with some kookie scientist to get back to the future. Hm, Back to the Future...Anyhow, I REALLY want to see something Japanese little Shuichi commence! Now, Edward and Stuart get to spend a little 'quality' time. I kind of get confused though with the names of the corresponding AU characters, except for who Stuart and Edward are of course. I know, that can't be helped; I mean, you put their names at the top of each chapter so it's my fault. Have Shuichi die his hair, so that no one gets confused! ^^ That'd be weird but atleast Shuichi could make an identity for himself.
So things I look forward to in the next chapter are: Skits with Shuichi, moments between Stuart and Edward, maybe Shuichi to die his hair so nobody gets confused, Shuichi meeting a kookie scientist and having a short period of time to come back home or else there'll be another paradox, and maybe, just MAYBE, Shuichi might see some people. | Reviewed By: KawaiiKaren On: February 13, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KK: Wow, awesome. Shuichi is still stuck in this world, right? That'd be funny if Edward thought he kept running into Steward often and having cute moments with him.
Sizzle: Then there would be some evil force of darkness and--
KK: NO, THIS HAS TO STAY A ROMANCE FIIIICCC, SIZZLE!
Sizzle: But it'd make the story more INTERESTING!
KK: Well, well, who cares...Whatever the author writes is fine with us, unless something terrible happens... | Reviewed By: Alyssa On: January 30, 2003 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm not really a great critic but I like the idea of the characters in a different time frame. I have yet to come across another author who has had the same idea and I am really looking forward to reading the rest. ;) | Reviewed By: Mirialdo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I liked it, hope you write more soon. Very interesting idea! | Reviewed By: Jinx On: October 22, 2002 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a very clever and entertaining retelling of the Gravi story. Well done! |
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