Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Not bad. I like the idea... it's a @_@ at first since the first few chapters are kinda repeated and such. But not bad. At least you've finished the story. It's really nice. There are a few misspellings and mistakes in the story, but not really THAT noticable. ^_^ Nice work! |
