| "Parting Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: October 02, 2005 15:40 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 14:50 CST
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it was sad, why did you kill Hiei, I don't like him so much that I'm willing to fight with my friends for him, but I like him enough not to kill him. Please don't kill Hiei and/or Kurama.
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 12:32 CST
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im going to cry that was sad i need a hug and some chocalte well weres my hug on to the next story Black princess aka Kurama or Hiei Both Great Boy Toys
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Reviewed By: Asaiye Shirla [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 11:55 CST
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No! You can't have Hiei die! That is the sadest fic I've ever read. Didn't expect the ending at all, but it works perfectly. *sighs* Now I'm gonna be depressed the rest of the day.
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Reviewed By: SnowyBlackOwl (--Kitsune_Dragontamer--) On: September 27, 2004 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here we are again, Raevynn, to the stage where you have to stand those people who give you perfect-ten ratings on everything. To me, it was somewhere between 8.5 and 9.6, and that's a very high rating to my opinion in my scale; as you said, it's rare that you find a perfect-ten story that you "lose yourself within" and "seem to be watching the whole thing unfold with your own eyes." Now, to my point: sad, good, continue. That's it. Also, will there be a sequel to this? I mean, with a work like this, it shouldn't be stopped at a point like that. I still want to read it, and I know some people who give you unecessary (oh gods; tell me if I spelled it wrong -- I seem to never get it right) ratings (i.e. BabbleQueen and a few others on your other fics) want you to continue as well. ;) That's all I'm saying. --Signing off, Kitsune_Dragontamer -- SnowyBlackOwl
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Reviewed By: BabbleQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 09:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I almost sobbed at the end of this fanfic. So sad...but...almost screams "Continue" and "sequell" =^_~= Keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 00:28 CDT
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ack!! nooooooooooooo..... (*&()*%*(&^$*(%^(*^$ caught me way off guard with that ending -__- good story but ... sheeesh... |
Reviewed By: Aejavu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh... BloodRaevynn, I have the perfect sequel in mind!!! Do you mind if I pick it up from here? I must say, this made me jump in my seat and curse Hiei... |
Reviewed By: summer psycho On: July 18, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful!!! I love it!! You should write a sequel!!! And I loved the ending, it surprised me!!! |
Reviewed By: Brooke On: June 23, 2003 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my...As I was reading I thought to myself, "Oh well Kurama will wake up and Hiei will be there and they'll get together. Everything will be fine." Then I got to the ending and...wow. Good job. I think it turned out great. |
Reviewed By: silvertoekee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 04:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
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whoa that is so sad hmm the end caught me by suprise |
