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| "Intertwined Fates" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NANI-WA AIBOU!!!! OMG!!
::jaw drops::
I.. i dont know what to say!! I really dont! I mean.. wow! Holy Jynx! ok. it was really great! after reading the first paragraph, my jaw dropped and i was stunned. this is SOO great!!
Hahaaha!!! NEKKO!!!! Neko!!! Neko! Neko!! Neko!!! Yay! yes. inside joke between you and me... hee hee!!!!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 ^_^ =)
please write more!!! ONEGAI!! write back!! | Reviewed By: Crazy Ash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I haven't read a decent Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic for a looong time! This is great! I can't wait to read the next chapter! ^_^ Hope you update it soon! I'll be wwaiting! | Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack, sent it twice! Dumb computer! I said stop! I forgot the dinky number. Here a ten, way cooler than anything else I've read, really.
I ain't lying. *-* Chocolate.... | Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 22:21 CDT
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Ooooohhh my gawd... this is so different from the e-mails you send me. I'd never be able to write something like this.
Well, i could, but it would sound so cheesy, like, something you see out of those poorly translated animes. You know, where the dude is saying one thing and his voice is saying another.
^^ This is interesting! I still think a reincarnation story would be cool. "In the year 2453 SC(second coming), Arisol(DP)* walked home and blah blah blah..."
See? Cheesy! You could add that name if you want. Sol is Spanish for sun and Ari is short for Aries, the Greek god of war. I may not have the main idea, but I'm the bomb at making up names.
*eats pudding* mmmm... chocolate...... Awww..... poor Yugioh-san... bested by a girl I see, *evil smile* I'll show you bested!!! Hya! *chucks can of salmon at Yami Yugi*
Hoo Hah! Gah! He's sending his giant evil lemon after me!!!! Ack!
* DP stands for Drunken Panda, meaning that the name is licensed by the Drunken Panda and only permissed peoples can use it. -_-;;; I'm so persistent....
Put me in! I don't care if I die there, I just want a guest appearence as like, the dud ethat dies in war or something. I'm thinking of putting you in Panda Love! ~.~ no more ideas.... wait, here's some... no wait that was just a breeze... | Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 22:21 CDT
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Ooooohhh my gawd... this is so different from the e-mails you send me. I'd never be able to write something like this.
Well, i could, but it would sound so cheesy, like, something you see out of those poorly translated animes. You know, where the dude is saying one thing and his voice is saying another.
^^ This is interesting! I still think a reincarnation story would be cool. "In the year 2453 SC(second coming), Arisol(DP)* walked home and blah blah blah..."
See? Cheesy! You could add that name if you want. Sol is Spanish for sun and Ari is short for Aries, the Greek god of war. I may not have the main idea, but I'm the bomb at making up names.
*eats pudding* mmmm... chocolate...... Awww..... poor Yugioh-san... bested by a girl I see, *evil smile* I'll show you bested!!! Hya! *chucks can of salmon at Yami Yugi*
Hoo Hah! Gah! He's sending his giant evil lemon after me!!!! Ack!
* DP stands for Drunken Panda, meaning that the name is licensed by the Drunken Panda and only permissed peoples can use it. -_-;;; I'm so persistent....
Put me in! I don't care if I die there, I just want a guest appearence as like, the dud ethat dies in war or something. I'm thinking of putting you in Panda Love! ~.~ no more ideas.... wait, here's some... no wait that was just a breeze... | Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems really intresting. I'd like to see more of it. Like who the girl is and who the king is. |
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