| "Deconfabulation and Loving Conviction" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Deconfabulation and Loving Conviction
Reviewed By: Dragon Tamer103088 On: July 22, 2004 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
danget when are you going to update this story, cause you dont have problems updating all of your other stories on fanfiction and the other websites so why wont you update here, i really want to know what happens to hiei so please update already, i really want to read the next chapter
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Title: Deconfabulation and Loving Conviction
Reviewed By: Dragon Tamer103088 (stories in fanfiction not here *sad*) On: July 07, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated it this way because i think that your story is really good and im getting pretty dang ticked that you havent updated becuase i really want to know what happens to hiei, is he going to make it are you going to describe the journie back to the temple, is he going to end up recoperating for awhile (hope so love those stories), did kuwabara get through to hiei, is hiei going to tell the truth to yukina???????????? please update already i really want to know i hope this review helps you think of ideas if you are having a writers block and if you just want more reviews i sent mine please update dont leave your faithful readers hanging on a clif all alone in the dark in the middle of no where its just not fair and if you dont update i might just start sending you EXTREAMILY LONG REVIEWS so please please please update already
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic was definatley different. But in a good way ^_^ Are you going to take it anywhere from here? Or was the "heart to heart" the only point to the story? I have to agree that the ending makes it look like there's more to come, but it's also a decent stand-alone. It just leaves you wondering what happened next ... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dragon Tamer103088 On: May 28, 2004 18:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon im dying here and i want to know if hiei is going to be ok your other storys cant be keeping you away from updating this story for that long of a period so please please please update and i hate begging so please dont make me keep doing it, begging is such a weak trait
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Reviewed By: Dragon Tamer 103088 On: April 01, 2004 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
this is really good please update soon i cant wait for the next chapter to come out is hiei going to be ok is kuwabara going to say anything to yukina is hiei going to tell yukina please update really soon cause i cant wait
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Reviewed By: anime12 On: February 14, 2004 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story yay hiei um well hiei acted like hiei so i don't have to say anything about it but he talked with kuwabaka to much atleast he insulted him and thought why am i doing this!
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Reviewed By: Piccolo'sVampire Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 13:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
As to the comment that 'Miz' made I think think Kuzuma/Hiei make a cute couple!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Piccolo'sVampire Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is beatuiful,Please keep updating it. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 09:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story, there is definetly potential for more chapters or a sequel. |
Reviewed By: morgaine_darkwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even if I love Suicide and Flux I hope they will leave you time to continue this. Kuwabara deserves more attention |
Reviewed By: miz On: October 06, 2002 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmmm..I really like this fic...you're not trying to go for a Kuwa/Hiei fic are you? |
Reviewed By: Hosi-chan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I will have to agree with Kb_girl3!
I wish I could enter your yaoi contest, but you know how I am with fics...*hangs head* I don't have any YYH yaoi fic anyway. |
Reviewed By: Kitt SSEH [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 12:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it. Nice to see Kuwa & Hiei interaction. Especially when Kuwabara argued about Yukina and being accepted with him. Er, sometimes Kuwabara is a little to.. um.. lectureing? *Shrug*
One thing thats started to irk me, though isn't a bad thing, is.. share the angst ^^. Yay for shared angst XD. Which is here and in suicide. Erm.. now I feel sadistical XD.
Please don't take it the wrong way. If you dont feel like I do, it is *your* fic. ^^;;; |
Reviewed By: Kb_girl3 On: October 06, 2002 08:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was an awsome story!!! I really love how you portrayed Kuwabara, comparing that most authors forget him! I just love the whole Kuwabara and Hiei interaction in this fic! I can't wait for more!
~Mei~ |
