| "Mysterious Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Minta On: October 23, 2002 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That last chapter was great!!! I just have one question, does Yugi have a crush on Sam or something? It just seems that way when Yami tells him that she might die and he started to break down. PLease keep on writing more chapters! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 20:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
really nice! :) anywayz...i was wondering...is yami bakura still bad? if he is...u could get them to join up or something! but then yami sam is good right...as in she wants the millennium items for a good reason...ah...i dunno...:) update soon! :) |
Reviewed By: Minta On: October 22, 2002 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your chapters!! After I read chapter ten, I wanted to know more of what happens between Yami Same and Yami!! PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!!!^-^ |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
ARRRGH!!!! that was very scary....the last bit! *shudders* haha...i guess no one CAN beat yami in duel monsters huh...anywayz, it really is a great story, stick with it! :) yeah...anywayz, i was just wondering whether you could answer this question for me: do you happen to know the name of Yugi's grandfather? just wondering...*sighz* i kinda need it for my own story. yeah anywayz, great story again! please continue!! :) |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2002 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! i really like it. btw, it's 'coma' not 'comma' anywayz, great chappy! i really wanna know who's her yami...and I HOPE SHE'S NOT MEAN! i expect it IS a she right? anyway...great chapter! great story!! :) i like it, it's nice! haha...and yami bakura stop being so mean!! (both in author's notes and in the story) *chases yami bakura with a huge hammer...* |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, i'll review!! it's really nice...i spose yami bakura is gonna be mean again and try to take the sword huh. well, it's pretty cool! please update, i can't wait to see what happens next! :)so...yami is paired up with sam? hmm...issit? anyway, can't wait for another chapter! :) |
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