| "Mysterious Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Minta Pudvah On: June 17, 2003 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a cool chapter! You should update more often!! Please keep on writing!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 06:52 CDT
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This is good. I love how Yami Sam strapped a knife to her leg. |
Reviewed By: Aerith_Leonheart On: February 27, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzz keep writing! I think its an aweseom fic! I thought that the last chappie was funny:)....It's all Kawaii!!! ^^; Can't wait for the next chap! |
Reviewed By: Minta On: February 25, 2003 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your last chapter was completely hilarious and romantic (from my POV)at the same time!! Just keep on writing, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Kitty On: February 15, 2003 14:53 CST
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I love the story but you shouldn't of asked for couple ideas because I make the wierdest ones. Ok umm, how about Yami and Yami Sam, and Yugi and Sam. I think that would be cute. O and a date idea Yami Sam and Yami should play Strip Duel Monsters, everytime you lose a monster you loses some clothes. Yami should lose for once, cause he's to busy looking at Yami Sam.-_-' I'm just crazy tho! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Meg On: February 13, 2003 14:50 CST
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Your story is really good! I am waiting for the next chapter. I cant wait...umm...i suggest Yami/yami sam and yugi/sam.
Keep it up, you are a good writer! :)
p.s. dont take it offensively that i didnt rate your story, but im not good at that stuff. |
Reviewed By: Minta Pudvah On: January 24, 2003 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED YOUR LAST CHAPTERS!!! AND I DO HAVE AN IDEA OR TWO ABOUT THE COUPLE IDEA......HOW ABOUT YUGI AND SAM BECOME A COUPLE, AND YAMI AND TEA CAN BECOME A COUPLE? THESE ARE JUST IDEAS, BUT YOU MIGHT WANT TO USE ONE OF THESE EXAMPLES IN THE STORY. JUST KEEP ON WRITING GIRL!!!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Keiya will do 4 now On: January 07, 2003 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's good so far dont give up on it. The spelling is like mine, but otherwise its a good story. you should come out with the next chapter soon ok. |
Reviewed By: ladygaladriel7 On: January 08, 2003 19:14 CST
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You updated!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! |
Reviewed By: Neko Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 19:13 CST
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I love it! ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 09, 2002 00:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I think that this is good so far. A little bit confusing, but you'll probably clear it up later. I don't really have any other ideas for you, but I look forward to your next update. |
Reviewed By: Minta Pudvah On: January 10, 2003 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
INCREDABLE!!! THOSE LAST THREE CHAPTERS WERE AMAZING!!! KEEP ON WRITING, I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! YYYYEEEEEAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!! (squeals in excitment and glomps Yami) ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Clarissa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 21:53 CDT
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| Reviewed By: Clarissa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 21:52 CDT
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| Reviewed By: SamandYamiSam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 20:56 CDT
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yes...sorry to say to all those yugi lovers out there..but he does..but dont worry!He doesnt pair up with her....at least..I hope not.. |
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