| "Mysterious Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Minta Pudvah On: January 24, 2003 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED YOUR LAST CHAPTERS!!! AND I DO HAVE AN IDEA OR TWO ABOUT THE COUPLE IDEA......HOW ABOUT YUGI AND SAM BECOME A COUPLE, AND YAMI AND TEA CAN BECOME A COUPLE? THESE ARE JUST IDEAS, BUT YOU MIGHT WANT TO USE ONE OF THESE EXAMPLES IN THE STORY. JUST KEEP ON WRITING GIRL!!!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Keiya will do 4 now On: January 07, 2003 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's good so far dont give up on it. The spelling is like mine, but otherwise its a good story. you should come out with the next chapter soon ok. |
Reviewed By: ladygaladriel7 On: January 08, 2003 19:14 CST
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You updated!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! |
Reviewed By: Neko Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 19:13 CST
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I love it! ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 09, 2002 00:45 CST
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I think that this is good so far. A little bit confusing, but you'll probably clear it up later. I don't really have any other ideas for you, but I look forward to your next update. |
Reviewed By: Minta Pudvah On: January 10, 2003 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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INCREDABLE!!! THOSE LAST THREE CHAPTERS WERE AMAZING!!! KEEP ON WRITING, I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! YYYYEEEEEAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!! (squeals in excitment and glomps Yami) ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Clarissa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 21:53 CDT
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| Reviewed By: SamandYamiSam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 20:56 CDT
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yes...sorry to say to all those yugi lovers out there..but he does..but dont worry!He doesnt pair up with her....at least..I hope not.. |
Reviewed By: Minta On: October 23, 2002 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That last chapter was great!!! I just have one question, does Yugi have a crush on Sam or something? It just seems that way when Yami tells him that she might die and he started to break down. PLease keep on writing more chapters! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 20:16 CDT
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really nice! :) anywayz...i was wondering...is yami bakura still bad? if he is...u could get them to join up or something! but then yami sam is good right...as in she wants the millennium items for a good reason...ah...i dunno...:) update soon! :) |
Reviewed By: Minta On: October 22, 2002 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your chapters!! After I read chapter ten, I wanted to know more of what happens between Yami Same and Yami!! PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!!!^-^ |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 22:11 CDT
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ARRRGH!!!! that was very scary....the last bit! *shudders* haha...i guess no one CAN beat yami in duel monsters huh...anywayz, it really is a great story, stick with it! :) yeah...anywayz, i was just wondering whether you could answer this question for me: do you happen to know the name of Yugi's grandfather? just wondering...*sighz* i kinda need it for my own story. yeah anywayz, great story again! please continue!! :) |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2002 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! i really like it. btw, it's 'coma' not 'comma' anywayz, great chappy! i really wanna know who's her yami...and I HOPE SHE'S NOT MEAN! i expect it IS a she right? anyway...great chapter! great story!! :) i like it, it's nice! haha...and yami bakura stop being so mean!! (both in author's notes and in the story) *chases yami bakura with a huge hammer...* |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 19:14 CDT
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ok, i'll review!! it's really nice...i spose yami bakura is gonna be mean again and try to take the sword huh. well, it's pretty cool! please update, i can't wait to see what happens next! :)so...yami is paired up with sam? hmm...issit? anyway, can't wait for another chapter! :) |
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