| "The Family Man" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: 13 and up On: August 11, 2005 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
please up date soon it has ben sooo long sins you have and i rilly whont to readmore so UP DATE SOON PLEASE ( sory if the speling is bad with some thing's).
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Reviewed By: v son sayain On: May 14, 2003 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh a second chance for trunks i love it goten and bra one of the best couples besides pan and trunks of cout=rse i need the next chappy to go on |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2002 09:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
G/B!!!!!!!!!!!! Not Marron, I don't know why, but I don't like her with Goten or Trunks, it's just wrong!
She only fits with Ubuu!
Bloody_X |
Reviewed By: ~Rachel~ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 19:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
^^ Very cute, I enjoyed it. And you should choose the other couple, but my vote would have to be with G&B. Anyway, yea, I liked your ficcy ^^
~Rachel~ |
