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| "Smile" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Eww! It's mushy!
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
:-P This was a mix of touching romantic-angst story and just plain corny. Terse sentences made for some great drama; furthermore, the introduction could really suck a reader in, however...could the rest of the story hold on?
| Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 03:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm responding. This fic was unbearably sad. "Smile" is a rather ironic name for soemthing this cry-worthy methinks XP ... Well written, to be sure, but damn, it's the kind of thing that at the wrong time can make someone just bawl...
--Shella-chan | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: October 10, 2002 13:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Obeying Heero now.
My opinion? I think it was Heero. Duo was the one sounding so desperate, wishing it was a dream, and telling Heero that everything was going to be okay. Heero was the one saying "Aishiteru" (I think I spelt that wrong, sorry).
Generally, the one saying "I love you" is the one dying.
Not too bad of a fic. A little hard to follow, but not bad. |
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