| "The new item" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Duelist On: November 03, 2002 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was ok. I hope it gets better in the later chapters |
Reviewed By: maliks gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz oh plz reveiw! i need ideas for my next chap! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 17:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
You need to work on some more chapters, but overall its not bad! ^_^
Write on!!! |
