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"The Cruelty and Fairness of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ]
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 Reviewed By: Sokudo Ningyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 22, 2005 04:30 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor, poor Mamoru. And I thought *I* enjoyed harassing him. His confusion over what happened over the past months was classic. This was also an excellent way of dealing with the rampant lesbianism SM fics love to employ. Love it.
 Title: I found it!
Reviewed By: Serenity Silvermoon [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 22, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my god, I read this a really long time ago. I think it was posted on moonromance.net at the time, I was up all night reading it wherever it was. Then I lost track of it, this thing is one of the few pieces of writing that made me cry when I was reading it. I'm so glad I've found it. Great job on this, I really love it. ~Serenity Silvermoon
 Reviewed By: kat  On: July 29, 2003 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the most creative sailor moon fanfiction I have read in a very long time, especially in the way it deals with the idea of same-sex relationships among the senshi. You manage to keep each of them very well in character and the problems they deal with are written with an incredible realism.

I found myself nearly in tears during the scene between Rei and her grandfather and laughing out loud at the entrance the girls made to lamaze class. ;) It's the simple details of their lives you include that make this a very touching story and I can't wait for you to continue.
 Reviewed By: yowza  On: July 02, 2003 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awesome awesome awesome! keep it comin! =D
 Reviewed By: Ano Kojena Nyaseina [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 25, 2003 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have this story in my favrets on ff.net. and I would here to if i could...
 Reviewed By: A Devoted Fan  On: May 27, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Crawlspace,
I LOVE this fic! I check every day to see if the next chapter is up. I hope you update soon. The suspense is killing me! Keep up the awesome writing, and I hope to read more of your great work soon!
 Reviewed By: BleedOrange  On: March 25, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story. I love your style, the way you portray the characters, the cliffhanger endings...it's wonderful. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!
 Reviewed By: wow  On: March 04, 2003 22:32 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love this fic...it's amazing, and i can't wait for the next part! i loyally check everyday for updates. =) i hope to read more soon! great job!
 Reviewed By: SgAltima [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2003 13:46 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Although I have reviewed elsewhere, please accept my praise, Crawlspace. You are quite a talented writer, and don't worry about getting the updates, because I know how hard it is to keep a good thing going.

Wonderful story. I am thoroughly impressed.

Always Watching,
SgAltima
 Reviewed By: moosebreath  On: January 10, 2003 05:24 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, it has been 5 chapters since my last review and the quality is still great.

I am still wondering if we have seen the last of the morphing "kids." It would be a shame if they were just a small plot device. The "happy ever after" part of me would love to see at least the youngest two salvaged.

I can't help but compare this one with "Absence." I've read about 1/3 of that, and it seems to be much heavier on the action while this is going after, dare I say, WAFF. Nothing wrong with that, I would just like to see a little (just a little) more of either in the other.

Of course, with the big move promised in the next chapter, who knows what will happen.
 Reviewed By: Alcandre  On: January 03, 2003 13:17 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story! I have read it from the beginning and will continue to the end! Both relationships (Rei/Minako and Ami/Makoto) are very loving and realistic!! It makes me want a one-and-only!!! *sigh* Oh, well... maybe one day.
Keep it up and I'll keep reading!
 Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 08, 2002 21:40 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm always excited when you get out a new chapter, and disapointed when I realize I've finished it...:( lol It's so romantic and realistic, with bumps and twists and a little angst every now and then. I can't wait for more.

~ The Firefaery ~
 Reviewed By: Carsomyr [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 28, 2002 12:54 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow what a incredible story. I as rather surprised at how well this story was written and even more so by how much I have enjoyed it. I have found the real life situations that come with a young woman going through a pregnacny to be near dead on accurate. But even more so I found, and can relate to, were the feelings of Ami while she was supporting her friend, those feelings of rejection, anger, confusion, and in that whole heap of emotions love for the friend you have always known.

I have truely enjoyed how you have also written the supporting cast especially Ami's mother. I also liked how you have managed to build the character development to the point where the reader not only cares and can relate to these characters but also how you have been able to keep the intrest, especially mine which can tend to wander, within a iron grip. Using more the characters emotions as bait to lure us into another chapter.

On a closing note I would like to say this is also one of the most tastefully done Sailor Moon fan fics that I have read, especially dealing with a same sex relationship. To aany who would not read this because of that, you will never know the true gem that you are missing. Keep up the great work and I eagerly await your next chapter
 Reviewed By: Rem Deus  On: October 25, 2002 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a great story. It's one of those that make you smile when the feeling are spilled. Great stuff, I can't wait for more.
 Reviewed By: Tanny  On: October 22, 2002 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great story. i'm really enjoying it so far. please keep going. i want to know what happens next. :)
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