| "Hells Rising" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Stan T. On: January 29, 2004 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's the point? Mike is SUPER! Gohan is SUPER! Videl is SUPER! Look at all of that power! Really, the thing that ticks me off is DBZ is about the fights and the fights you wrote were unoriginal, stupid, and the only thing you did to be creative was to incorporate other attacks from other shows! However, when you had Gohan and Videl sacrifice themselves so Mike could get the finishing attack, I was impressed. That went away when Mike told them he had another trick up his sleeve that would have saved the day and their heroics were pointless. SO WHY ARE GOHAN & VIDEL HERE AT ALL? WHAT IS THE POINT!?!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Arbron On: July 11, 2003 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew... finally finished!
Well, I say that was probably the longest and best fic I have ever read!
The style of writing got me interested very quickly (and maybe the fact that I like the idea of Gohan and Videl being a couple as kids...)
Arbron |
Reviewed By: DokuRyu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 08:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey I still love the story, but it would be even better if you took some techniques from naruto, and brought Rock Lee in from that series. He's a bad ass! I can't wait to see your other stories! |
Reviewed By: DokuRyu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 13:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
For the poll, you shouldn't get three people from the salor moon show. You should have Naruto instead of one of the girls, and The DBZ/Tenchi Crossover would have to go before the Hells Rising, since Gohan can't tap SSJ2, it would be like a side story or somthing. You should also put the Zoids as a prequel. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your match descriptions are okay, I guess. Hurry and Update! |
